Your shyt isn't even in a novel format, I took two minutes out of my life to look at it and they look like horrid erotica literature fails from a virgin nerd with mediocre writing abilities and an unhealthy obsession with a God awful video game storyline, or lack thereof. The nicest thing anyone could tell you is stop before you waste even more of your time. No man or woman could write a good "novel" about Destiny. Just keeping it 100