Honest feedback here. You're not bad. But not a god. Let me give you some tips on video making that will help you out. For one, try using clips that are impressive to others, not just yourself. I suggest anything with a triple down plus, and two doubles in a row, or where you survived and just shouldn't have. Two, stop using slowmo wrong. If the clip can't handle being slowed down that far, it makes the video look like an a mature made it. Speaking of... Three, use a pregenerated intro clip. Since you are editing on the computer, you'll have access to one easily that you can edit to suit your needs. Four, make sure to thank your audience. Five, be humble. No one likes a prick, that's why every good villain is a prick. I give two ducks if you use a shotgun as your primary. However, it is seen as a less skilled weapon. Your sniper clips were better, but you need two quick head shots for it to qualify for a montage video. My two cents.