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Hey guys, here are the first two parts of my fanfiction. Hope you like it, and constructive criticism is welcome.
Part 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Aqsp02IvYmD70eWHhOmrflxscWpJ9PIHuImKh33pYM8/edit?usp=sharing
Part 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEfY5k92_1chUk44bZ6YYIjrDvq0YUuker_zR_SUttE/edit?usp=sharing
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I enjoy what you have so far. You use a good variety of words, and that's appreciable.