-I apologize for anyone who was waiting for this post, I won't take this long next time
-Link to the other Raids
https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/110766177/0/0
[b][i][u]MISSION:[/u][/i][/b]
Investigate a mysterious energy spike coming from the den of the Dissident Fallen house...
[b][i][u]RAID PT. I[/u][/i][/b]
6 guardians land on a helipad on a skyscraper in now ruined Japan, after fighting through some Fallen, a bit of Ghost dialogue gives info on the Fallen House in question. The Dissidents were different in a sense that they didn't have a Servitor 'god' to supply them with Ether. The Dissidents instead mined for it manually, and because they had no Servitor, the Vanguard cared little of their actions. The 6 guardians jump off the edge of the skyscraper and land in a ruined street below.
[b][i][u]RAID PT. II[/u][/i][/b]
The 6 guardians are given limited free-roam capabilities for investigative purposes. They are permitted to enter a multitude of different buildings, searching for clues to the recent behavior of Dissident activity. Once 1 guardian enters a specific building containing Fallen data charts (Bank), the others are required to join the guardian. A vault in the back of the bank is swung open, and the 6 see some Dissident Fallen clamber into a large hole in the middle of the vault floor. The 6 follow, and Dissident Fallen are awaiting their arrival, eager to kill. After the 6 fight for a while, they travel through a massive underground maze until 1 guardian reaches a giant iron door, skulls clad around it.
[b][i][u]RAID PT. III[/u][/i][/b]
Once all 6 guardians make it to the door, it opens, revealing an incredibly massive underground cistern area. There is a hole in the roof of the cavern where you can see the sky, as well as some really tall trees. Moss grows on the walls, and a few Vex structures can be seen jutting from the walls (no Vex here though :D). A few Fallen can be seen absorbing energy from nearby exposed Ether deposits, and they have a higher health than the ones fought before. A 'miniboss' falls through the hole in the roof (His name is Ficxxis) he along with a group of Dissident Fallen attack you. Once defeating them, parkour up the walls of the cistern to leave out of the hole in the roof. Once out, you discover that you're in the center of the densely overrun suburbs of downtown Japan. Fallen ships approach from behind the 6, and a Ghost prompt urges the players to hop on their sparrows and drive through the dense, overrun city streets. After driving for a while, the 6 stumble upon an abandoned brick factory. More Fallen inside, along with another big hole in the floor. The guardians enter the dark hole.
[b][i][u]RAID PT. IV[/u][/i][/b]
The walls on the inside are glowing white with Ether, and a deep, electronic whir can be heard elsewhere. Dissident Fallen crawl out of the walls to kill you, and the 6 come across a massive round Vault door. Another Earth Warmind dwelt here, but has since shut down. The 6 enter and there is a massive Servitor hooked up to multiple sources of tubing coming out of the wall. The Dissident Fallen are creating their own god, floating above a very dark abyss. The lights are flickering, and the Servitor is making panels in the floor near it fall into the abyss. 6 energy pylons around the room activate and raise out of the ground. They each have a big pool of health and the guardians have to take them out one or two at a time, surviving Dissident Fallen assaults. Once this is done, the Servitor disconnects from the tubing connected to him, and begins to attack the guardians. He has a massive shield which protects him (much like a Hydra) from one side. Each guardian will have to go on one side of him and shoot whenever he is exposed. The Servitors name is Amazuris Prime, the False God. your team will have to survive multiple assaults from Dissident Fallen. Once you do enough damage to the Servitor, he periodically shoots put a massive solid beam of energy, instakilling anything in its path. The 6 guardians do more and more damage to him. Once defeated, the servitor falls into the chasm below him, exploding into 100 pieces. You've found the source of the mysterious energy spike, guardians. Mission over.
[b][i][u]RAID WEAPONS:[/u][/i][/b]
-Piledriver: Legendary Auto Rifle (Solar)
-Indicator 0-99: Legendary Scout Rifle (Arc)
-Dissident Messaging: Legendary Hand Cannon (Solar)
-Hand of the Survivor: Exotic Hand Cannon (Void)
-Wingrider: Legendary Pulse Rifle (Solar)
-Invictus: Legendary Shotgun (Void)
-Skullbreaker: Legendary Sniper Rifle (Arc)
-Basic Instinct: Legendary Fusion Rifle (Solar)
-Showstopper: Legendary Rocket Launcher (Void)
-J.O.L.T. P59: Legendary Machine Gun (Arc)
[b][i][u]RAID ARMOR:[/u][/i][/b]
-Titans: Futuristic Samurai armor (it's a Japanese raid)
-Hunters: High tech stealth armor (Basically Ninjas)
-Warlocks: Advanced Feudal Monk armor (sorry Warlocks, but you guys have better armor in my other raids)
[b][i][u]RAID SHIPS:[/u][/i][/b]
-Darksmasher: Black ships with a purple glow, has purple engines
-Skybreaker: Dark blue, light grey accent, has blue engines
-Faith Without Trust: Grey ship, red engines, covered in Fallen
[b][i][u]RAID SPARROW(S):[/u][/i][/b]
-Street Cred: Black Sparrow, painted red flames, has a red contrail, can do backflips
-Breaking Beyond Asunder: Grey Sparrow, yellow contrail, hold triggers to overload engines for an immediate explosion
[b][i][u]RAID SHADERS:[/u][/i][/b]
-Fuedal Right: Black, red accents, small orange-yellow stripes
-Scheme of Dissidents: Orange, white accents
[b][i][u]CHEST LOCATIONS:[/u][/i][/b]
-1 under the Helipad
-2 in randomized places in the open world bit
-1 in cistern
-1 in sparrow chase
[b][i][u]GHOST SHELL:[/u][/i][/b]
-Dissident Shell: Orange, white pinstripes, orange eye
[b][i][u]PLEASE LEAVE POSITIVE FEEDBACK, AND LET ME KNOW WHICH RAID TO DO NEXT :D[/u][/i][/b]
Edit 1: Some good feedback so far. Keep it up please :)
Edit 2: Gave the Servitor a name
Edit 3: Changed Warlock armor
Edit 4: Chest locations
Edit 5: Bit of distaste for this one, I promise to work harder on the next one
Edit 6: Lot of mixed emotions for this one xD
Edit 7: Legendary Hand Cannon
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This would've been so much better than the prison of elders lol
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I gotta keep an eye on these. Well thought out raids, interesting ideas
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When will we do the Bump raid? I'm so excited for it!
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Not enough void.
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Where's the new hybrid? The one called "DEEZ NUTS"?
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All frazzled frazis are reporting for duty sir
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No legendary hand cannon? Not interested
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Great idea for a raid
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I would gladly play this raid. Great job!
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Damn bro,I'll go back to do the guns and all that. Just gotta do some work here and I'll be back. Oh and bump.
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scrub get out of the forums
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Don't get discouraged by the hate. Needs some tuning but could be a fun raid.
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There should be a part after killing the Servitor where a Kel or something comes out of a door with like 20 Vandals and 2 Captains all Yellow Bar, the Kel of course being like the final final boss, and during the fight fallen walkers appear and you have to kill those before you kill the Kel, I just feel like there should be atleast one more boss, the earlier mentioned was just a thought.
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Cool ideas, how about a 3 man fire team hard patrol leading up to public event. Where each guardian has to defend a LZ
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It's great but would be better as a strike. The other two raids have relics and your basically fighting Gods.
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Wasn't a wasted read...... Some of the comments were funny but other than that...... Keep scrolling.
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Up vote for 'ninja armour' ^_^
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My god, what is it with this Raid, and hate? XD
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I originally came here to post a fan-made Grimoire Card about the House of Dissidents, so here I go. Fallen- House of Dissidents [spoiler]Their name may differ, but the Dissidents are treated much like the House of Exile, due to their actions. Old Fallen stories tell of the Dissidents originally being part of the House of Devils, but later rebelling (an ex-Winter Kell may have had something to do with it,) as a way of attempting to conquer the Earth for themselves. Luckily (though sadly,) they only managed to capture Old Japan, and Taiwan. Nonetheless, they are different. But don't underestimate them. [/spoiler] You're welcome. :)
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Is this a joke!?!?! Land on a helipad when u have spaceships and then "freeroam" to the same place every time this is what got me really laughing though "PARKOUR" up the wall
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This is a stupid raid. Probably would be better as a strike.
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Bungie this is what a [b][u][i]REAL[/i][/u][/b] Raid looks like. Take notes
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Amazing raid idea, beats the last raid by a marathon
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Bungie needs to hire you dude... This is leaps and bounds better than CE.