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`${userDetail.user.displayName}${userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode ? `#${standardizeBungieGlobalCode(userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode)}` : ""}`}}
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The Nightstalker Order - Episode 1 : The Eye of a Sniper
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2 RepliesEdited by Helykaon: 6/17/2015 7:09:29 PMAlright, time for my first bit of feedback. It looks good so far, but one thing every writer must learn is paragraph spacing. Make short paragraphs that people can read. Dialogue would be great to, even if it's just the main character thinking to himself, one thing To be sure of is don't have more than 1 character speak per paragraph.
