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Syrus Contour is an awoken male. When he was six years his family flew to Earth so his father could investigate in the Vault of Glass. After his Father left for the Vault of Glass with five other Guardians, he attended the Guardian training academy where they teach you everything to become a Guardian. After about 5 months in the academy Syrus received news that his father along with four others died in the Vault of Glass. The cause of their deaths was unknown and there were no remains found. Syrus didn't take it lightly and he trained hard and long to make up for his father. He swore to graduate and traverse through the Vault of Glass in spite of his father. He was the best in his class out of 3 other classes. Hunters, Warlocks, and Titans. Everyone looked up to him and tried to befriend him but no matter who tried he preferred to be alone. His teacher tried to talk to him about why he wouldn't want to try and make friends but he never got anywhere. Syrus was determined to become a Guardian and get through the Vault.
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Nice, it's gonna need some work in the paragraph department tho, nice start. :)