1) You need to specify what this device is and does in order to assure you're not making up items
2)My sword wouldn't break, shit's way too expensive.
3)A post should end after one reaction, posting 3 follow ups(your device shooting, your pulling out of another gun and shooting, and your retreat) is a tad much
4) You didn't specify where you shot me anyway
5) I'd be gravely injured at worst, complete immobilization is an overstatement
6)People don't pass out right away from 2 gunshots, yeah they'd bleed but not pass out seconds later
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((I shot him where I was originally aiming, the knees, which is supposedly extremely painful. Ergo, the passing out.))
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((Refer to point number 3, and even if the shots land the adrenaline running by now would mask most of the pain, it would come right after, but not at the moment of tension))
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((Ok, but Crane needs to get out of the area. There's a bounty starting soon, and he can't have a huge battle.))
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((Then just flee, didn't you have a teleporter ? ))