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[Novel] True Sangheili (Part 39 available!) ~ 18 December

SCHOLAR, SOLDIER, HERETIC... SAVIOUR. At first, the life of a warrior in the Covenant army seems a noble one. But are the motives behind the war with the humans as innocent as the Sangheili, Sorran, believes? An act of heresy unveils a conspiracy spanning thousands of years, which could bring about the total ruin of the Covenant. [i] True Sangheili[/i], from the fan fiction author of [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=31052475]Halo 3: Insurrection[/url] and [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=27927918]Memoirs of an ODST[/url]. [u] ==[b]CHAPTER LISTING[/b]==[/u] [b]Book I[/b] ([url=http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B4iUh3dauqsjN2QzMjBjYzQtZGE2Ny00ZDUzLThlZTQtNDIwMDJjYTBjNTk3&hl=en]PDF[/url]) [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35203356]Prologue + Chapter list[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35203379]Part One - Sorran[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35253886]Part Two - Warrior[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35297818]Part Three - Besieged[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356#35673800]Part Four - Into Custody[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true#36184265]Part Five - Interrogated[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#36420291]Part Six - Assessment[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#36697145]Part Seven - Covert Extraction[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=2#37436099]Part Eight - To kill a Demon[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37531866]Part Nine - Immortal Repentance[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37685366]Part Ten - Insertion[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=3#37728386]Part Eleven - To show mercy[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=4#37912997]Part Twelve - Heresy, of the greatest kind[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=4#37970850]Part Thirteen - Trial and Punishment[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=5#38158685]Part Fourteen - Factions within Factions[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=6#38396722]Part Fifteen - The Truth[/url] [b]Book II[/b] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=7#39673575]Part Sixteen - Life goes on[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=7#39888838]Part Seventeen - Things never go according to plan[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=9#41709559]Part Eighteen - The sound of battle[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=10#43058906]Part Nineteen - Old habits die hard[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&viewreplies=true&postRepeater1-p=10#43585008]Part Twenty - Cultural differences[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=11#49109093]Part Twenty One - Personified Death[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=12#50885734]Part Twenty Two - Breaking Point[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=14#51826058]Part Twenty Three - Turnabout[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=19#54241416]Part Twenty Four - Breaking free[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=21#55868885]Part Twenty Five - Mutiny[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=23#57570727]Part Twenty Six - Skirmishes, and Reflections[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=24#58101291]Part Twenty Seven - Shrouded Heresy[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=24#58896376]Part Twenty Eight - Signs and Portents[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=25#59170042]Part Twenty Nine -Parted Reunion[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=26#60763537]Part Thirty - Honour[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=29#62705377]Part Thirty One - Visitations to the past[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=30#63447045]Part Thirty Two - Loss concealed within victory[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=32#63843302]Part Thirty Three - The best intentions[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=34#64909520]Part Thirty Four -The Tower came crashing down.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=38#66761388]Part Thirty Five - Blood runs thick, brotherhood runs thicker.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=42#68771851]Part Thirty Six - For whom the bell tolls, for whom hell calls.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=45#70648196]Part Thirty Seven - Daggers in a cloak.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=50#73021323]Part Thirty Eight - Gods and their weapons.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356&postRepeater1-p=53#76375771]Part Thirty Nine - Trials of Delphi.[/url] [i]Next chapter ETA: Valve Time[/i] **** ***** ***** ****** ***** [b]Prologue[/b] [i]Edict of the Most High Prophet of Truth, 9th Age of Reclamation.[/i] By the authority of the noble Prophets of Truth, Regret, and Mercy. Henceforth, any and all battle worthy Sangheili are to be transferred from any idle posts in High Charity and/or upon any Covenant held world/ship into the active combat. Those amongst the excused are the Honour Guard, the Councillors, and the mentally ill, physically unfit, and the old. Female Sangheili are, as always, prohibited from taking part in any military action. Any Sangheili engaged in a guard post, other than the Honour Guard, will be replaced by the Jiralhanae until such a time as the High Council deems otherwise. Any Jiralhanae in question of where they now stand shall direct all enquiries to Tartarus, Chieftain of the Jirahanae. Failure to adhere to this edict will result in death. No exceptions. These are trying times, my brothers. The Human infidels persist in resisting the might of the Covenant. Rest assured, this 'war' as some are calling it, will be over soon -- to be forgotten and dismissed as an insignificant event in Covenant history. [Edited on 12.17.2012 5:35 PM PST]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] AssaultCommand I'll help you proof-read it if you want. Even if you don't want it, I'd help you. Actually, I just want to read it early. [i]Yeah, I know...[/i][/quote] I've been asking him to let me "proof-read" for a long time now.

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  • Certainly looking forward to it.

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  • I'll help you proof-read it if you want. Even if you don't want it, I'd help you. Actually, I just want to read it early. [i]Yeah, I know...[/i]

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  • Awesome, I can't wait.

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  • Well, chapter 34 is finished, finally. Clocking in at half the length of [i]Insurrection[/i]'s epilogue and about three times the length of [i]True Sangheili[/i]'s last chapter, it's a long one with a lot happening in it. As a result, I'll have to spend a while proof-reading it too. But it's worth the wait, I think. I want to make sure I've captured the essence of the events in this chapter the best I can. Expect it soon, though.

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  • We know who illusive66 is. He's actually a friend of Wolvers and me who is just trolling on an alt so don't take him seriously. I don't want this to get locked so let's keep posts on topic. And can't wait for the next part, it sounds excellent. [Edited on 08.16.2011 12:20 PM PDT]

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  • ^Inciting the flame war Guys, if somebody posts some detrimental comment that isn't constructive criticism, let's just ignore it. This should go for all of the gallery.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Illusive66 I had to log on to post this. I have not been here all that long, and I do not post that often. But, I have been lurking for a long while. YOU MADE ME POST THIS[/quote] Greetings. Perhaps it would be better if you did not post, for you seem to be trying to incite what we of the internet call a flame-war. Or, perhaps you are just a jealous child who has written a terrible fanfiction and are now jealous of the Lord of Fanfiction's story. [quote]What the hell is with this? Are you trying to bore me with two dimensional characters, a story which has obviously been made up as it went along and twists so obvious a bat could see them? Your vocabulary is limited and your intelligence is in question.[/quote] I find the characters to be very 3 dimensional. And I'm betting most novels are made up as they go along. The twists really aren't that obvious (Well, I knew Ahkrin was going to kill Restraint the moment it was said he was called by the Hierarchs). I do not believe Wolverfrog's vocabulary is limited at all, and the only person whose intelligence is in question here is yours. The writers intelligence has nothing to do with this, however. I do wish you would try to be less irrelevant. [quote]I read this story out of fascination that a story could actually gather a damned fanbase when other fan fics get no readers at all, its just unfair and retarded.[/quote] Fun-Fact: This story gets more readers because, perhaps, people like it more than other stories. That, my friend, is called an opinion. You learn something new every day, don't you? Another Fun-Fact: You are a jealous child who was probably written a terrible fanfiction. If you want viewers, please, try not to write something like this: "once upon a time m4st3r ch13f kicked ass the end". [quote]Also, I can't help but notice how overly human you make the elites, they're not tea-drinking, chocolate eating brits, they are aliens and they should be portrayed as such. You've somehow managed to make half of your fanbase -blam!-ly attracted to aliens, you are a furry machine and I seriously think you might be attracted to fricking elites too.[/quote] While I kind of agree the Sangheili seemed a little to much like humans at times, its better than "WORT WORT WORT". How dare you accuse any of his fanbase of being attracted to aliens without evidence. You sir, are an abomination! *smacks with leather glove* I know not why you think Wolver is one of those appalling creatures we call "furries". [quote]Anyway, had to get that off my chest.[/quote] Thank you for your opinion. It is important to us. Now if you'll excuse me, I must take out the trash. *throws Illusive66's opinion in a trash compactor* -Your friend, Sangheili Prophet. :) Now that that's over with, great chapters Wolverfrog. Keep 'em coming!

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  • Next up: Phoenix's Penance, or that story you said you might be doing for revolutions 2.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] AssaultCommand He dropped memoirs II because he didn't like where it was going or something. But I figure TS should be out within a month.[/quote] It won't take that long, it's almost finished. 10,000 words long so far so it's certainly a decently long read :)[/quote]That's... rather alarming.

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  • I meant, would he return to it. and yes I know he dropped it a long time ago...

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] AssaultCommand He dropped memoirs II because he didn't like where it was going or something. But I figure TS should be out within a month.[/quote] It won't take that long, it's almost finished. 10,000 words long so far so it's certainly a decently long read :)

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  • He dropped memoirs II because he didn't like where it was going or something. But I figure TS should be out within a month.

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  • your stories are fantastic, I haven't seen anything better. I would like to know when your next update will be for True Sangheili, or Memoirs of an ODST(book 2)?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ZeonCobra Nice job on the story, but aren't you going to update it on Fanfiction.net?[/quote] I will when book two is finished. I'll certainly have my work cut out, there's a lot of update. Sorry that this next chapter it taking a while to write; rest assured I am writing it; I was considering releasing it as it was but decided it wasn't apt to end the chapter there and so have extended it. It's the longest chapter to date (I seem to be saying that with every chapter recently) and it's still got a little bit to go before completion; there are a lot of big moments in it. Thanks for your patience.[/quote] Take your time, Wolverfrog. Your stories are amazing. Sorry i can't say more, i'm just REALLY tired atm. :)

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ZeonCobra Nice job on the story, but aren't you going to update it on Fanfiction.net?[/quote] I will when book two is finished. I'll certainly have my work cut out, there's a lot of update. Sorry that this next chapter it taking a while to write; rest assured I am writing it; I was considering releasing it as it was but decided it wasn't apt to end the chapter there and so have extended it. It's the longest chapter to date (I seem to be saying that with every chapter recently) and it's still got a little bit to go before completion; there are a lot of big moments in it. Thanks for your patience. [Edited on 08.12.2011 4:19 PM PDT]

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  • Nice job on the story, but aren't you going to update it on Fanfiction.net?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] AssaultCommand Also, although this is off-topic, please at least attempt to finish [url=http://floodgrunt.deviantart.com/art/Phoenix-s-Penance-187028505]this story[/url] when you're finished with True Sangheili.[/quote] Maybe. We'll see what my morale regarding fan fiction is like once this in finished. Next chapter shouldn't be too far off, I'll try get it finished tonight. Thanks for all your support, everyone.[/quote] Do not thanks us. You are the one we need to thank my friend

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] AssaultCommand Also, although this is off-topic, please at least attempt to finish [url=http://floodgrunt.deviantart.com/art/Phoenix-s-Penance-187028505]this story[/url] when you're finished with True Sangheili.[/quote] Maybe. We'll see what my morale regarding fan fiction is like once this in finished. Next chapter shouldn't be too far off, I'll try get it finished tonight. Thanks for all your support, everyone.

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  • Also, although this is off-topic, please at least attempt to finish [url=http://floodgrunt.deviantart.com/art/Phoenix-s-Penance-187028505]this story[/url] when you're finished with True Sangheili.

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  • Great job i like it man keep up the good work :)

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  • Why did you feel the need to tell him your petty problems with his wonderful story. Maybe you could not lurk and gtfa. If you have a problem with his story, there is an extremly simple salution: Spend your time else where. Unfortunatly, people as rude as you post things like this when they dont need to be involved. Unless of course you are super defencive of the halo universe canon and are a nerd who wants to look cool in front of the viewers of this story. On a happer note, great strory wolverfrog. Please dont stop. By the way, shouldn't you tie things up with sorran and savhra and make them a couple again? ;) I think that you shouldn't let people put you down for your writing and i also think that you shouldnt put yourself down in the same way. So I think i speak for kost of us when i say that even he beginning was awesome and showed great potential. Every thing is very well written with the exeptions of a minor few parts that i wouldn't care to go into detail over. Anyway that person who bad mouthed you can go to hell right? Great work!! :D One last thing I think you have great potential as a writer and should go down that career path. Unless, of course you were planning on doing something else. Anyway dont let people put you down and don't put yourself down either. That isn't going to get you anywhere in life. I think i speak for most of us when i say that even the beginning [Edited on 08.09.2011 11:32 PM PDT]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] PyroEstro I have a feeling The prophets are trying to get Akhrin killed...[/quote]Have the assassin be assassinated after his job is complete: tie up the lose ends.

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  • I have a feeling The prophets are trying to get Akhrin killed...

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  • No, I meant as in him writing books and making money off it.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Evil 37 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ENDESHA 115117 You could be a writer you know that, yes?[/quote] He already his a writer.[/quote]Thank god you're not his editor. :)

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