The overall appearance of the painting is appalling. The use of colorization is awful, you have harmonized the color palettes horribly. The overall value mass balance leaves much to be desired. Both of these things being the most important factors in a successful painting, you have failed miserably.
Your use of subject sensitivity is subpar, and you failed to consider the foliage of the subject. The diffused lighting of this scene was completely undermined by the foreground used in this piece. Additionally, your interpretation of the angles and shapes were done sloppily. It overall creates a visual mess, and your composition is completely horrid.
Your linear perspective is completely incorrect, and your textures are as drab as the dirt road. There is nothing beautiful about this scene, only a mess of colors and lines. There is no depth either, I cannot feel anything significant as a viewer and my eyes feel no impact from this scene.
Overall, this is one of the worst painting I have ever seen in my existence. From my experience, I usually end my critiques wishing the artist to continue their passion in hopes of success, but from the quality of this work, I can fully conclude that you have no future in art whatsoever.
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Well ok then.
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This is not art. (I tried mimicking Bob Ross only to fail utterly in distaste.)