[b][i][u]Note: I am still working on this, so I will be continually back to edit it the more time I have. I'm posting now at request of a Guardian. Enjoy![/u][/i][/b]
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Edit 1. Watch all you that are excited hate the story that I come up with lol...[/spoiler]
[i]Intro[/i]
[b]Destiny: the Movie[/b]
[b][i][u]Prologue[/u][/i][/b]
[i]Those of today may have never known about life before...
The life before the Collapse.[/i]
[i]Before the Collapse, there was the Golden Age, the pinnacle of Earth.[/i]
[i]Humanity had always dreamed of exploring the stars; the vastness of the universe itself, the endless travel of the infinite beyond...[/i]
[i]They were given the Traveler.[/i]
[i]The Traveler was a strange anomaly. When it arrived, it began terraforming the other planets in the solar system. Humanity observed this and reached out to the Traveler at the red planet, Mars. When they did so, they were shown new technologies and wonders beyond their wildest imaginations; new power and abilities, new designs and equipment. The Traveler showed humanity what they thought was everything they could ask for.[/i]
[i]During this time, new technology allowed creation of the Exo, a robotic humanoid capable of sentient intelligence. The Exo lived with no apparent memory of their origin, nor their purpose. They were supposedly created to protect their creators.[/i]
[i]However, Exo's have depicted that many encounter a dream they call Deep Stone Crypt, reminding them "where they were born". It is described as the experience that first gave life to an Exo's conciousness. However, with a new Era came a new, seemingly mystical being; the Ahamkara.[/i]
[i]The Ahamkara were Avian in appearance, with similarities to what many would call dragons. The Ahamkara were supposedly wish - fulfilling creatures that many would seek out in search of power. The power that these beings could give would tear humans apart, until at last, the Ahamkara were hunted to extinction.[/i]
[i]The Great Ahamkara Hunt was the campaign launched to kill these creatures. Because the wishes granted by Ahamkara would cause more harm than good, humanity deemed them too dangerous to live. Remains of Ahamkara are still seen today, and some are even worn by individuals.[/i]
[i]Most of the advances in technology involved AI and medicine, with most others evolving at a slower rate. However, these technologies would attract new, powerful aliens. These races sought the powerful technology that humanity had achieved; some sought to destroy humanity itself.[/i]
[i]However, the worst was still to come...the enemy of today, the enemy that all know.
The Darkness.[/i]
[i]The Darkness is the ancient enemy of the Traveler, tracking it and feeding off of its Light. It was once the ruler of the universe, and some of the alien races worship it as their God.
It appeared on the edge of the solar system; some phenomenon that was observed by a Warmind, an AI built to protect humanity. This AI, known as Rasputin, observed what variables depicting the anomaly that showed intelligence and intent.
In an effort to understand it more, Rasputin ran numerous processes to figure out the experience. In its conclusion, Rasputin deemed the Darkness to be heading to the solar system, almost in anger.
In what could be described as alarm, Rasputin triggered defensive protocols. Nevertheless, the Darkness devastated humanity, with survival only possible because of the Traveler. In its dying breath, it created Ghosts, fragments of light that were sent to search for Guardians, protectors of life.
This is the story of one such Guardian, whose tale of his Destiny would be told throughout history...[/i]
[b][i][u]Awakening[/u][/i][/b]
[spoiler]This is a spoiler to notify all readers that I am not working on this at the moment; I have other matters. I will work on this whenever.[/spoiler]
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Third sentence... Remove "But" from "But before the collapse" having that In but in there doesn't make sense. Also nice work I'm not hating just helping. Thanks