JavaScript is required to use Bungie.net

OffTopic

Surf a Flood of random discussion.
Edited by KrayZGamerGirl: 12/30/2015 4:37:49 AM
248

A Deeper Meaning...

"Wherever I walk, blood and bodies follow in my wake. Wherever I speak, my lungs burn people at the stake. They're drawn to me, like moths to a flame. It makes me crazy, it drives me insane." What do you think?

Posting in language:

 

Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

View Entire Topic
  • Edited by Sylok's Defiler: 12/30/2015 6:45:01 PM
    You sound like one serious home wrecker. But on the note that your tags of poetry aren't for show, then you may think what you have written has a deeper meaning. It very well may, but from the average reader, your stanza is direct. It sounds like there is no deeper meaning; you are describing your own agony in that the masses fail to understand what you say and what you do. This isn't a deeper meaning, this is teenage emotion channeled into remorse. Of course, I very well may be wrong. I'm only a creative writing minor, but I tried and that's what counts. Get back to me when you can. I'd like to hear what it means after all.

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

    6 Replies
    1 2
    You are not allowed to view this content.
    ;
    preload icon
    preload icon
    preload icon