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1/10/2016 4:26:51 PM
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Hey Nuke, can u see how well this is??? Compared to my [b]last[/b] story....
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Edited by NukeHawk116: 1/10/2016 6:14:42 PMIf I had a say of what happens it would be that the warlock gets kicked out of the vanguard and the speaker sends him into an extremely secretive branch named timeseeker (you can add dozens of OC here)
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Edited by StreamingJet: 1/10/2016 6:57:29 PMI think this is the right one. [b]THIS ONE NUKE[/b]
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Which one are you trying to show me?
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The one above this post.
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It's not bad... My issue is who is meant to be the protagonist?
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You really don't get into his head until the first chapter
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Edited by NukeHawk116: 1/10/2016 7:16:28 PMThen it is average/above-average so far...
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Do you have OCs that you could let me use???
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Resnov "Cobalt" Kinlev III Russian Specializes in heavy weapons Lugs minigun, rocket launcher, deagle. Lieutenant first class [spoiler]anything else you want me to add?[/spoiler]
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Kinda blew up, but was teleported via teleportation bomb
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Quiet Tabetic... *puts index finger in front of your nose*
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Edited by TabeticTerror1: 1/10/2016 7:54:15 PM*slaps finger and gives thrall hand*
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I don't need a new hand...
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*reaches into bottomless bag and pulls out a cookie and gives it to nuke*
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*snatches cookie and woofs it down*
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*pours cookies into a bucket*
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It was a bit stale...
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*pours more cookies*
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*Shoves bucket back* (this is real life) I've had almost a pound of chocolate and a large bar of Tolberone... I don't want anymore junk food right now...
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Edited by TabeticTerror1: 1/10/2016 8:48:12 PM•________________________• its a whale!
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Thanks. I think I'll start Ch. 1 . Can you help me with rallying a few OC's? I have my own but I want to use some other's OCs
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Private Alex Wolf Logger. It's just the prelogue
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Dang it. It was the wrong one. But thanks for the input
