The Winter's Ketch hung in the Venus night sky over the Cinders. The Fallen were completely oblivious to the two guardians that were in the area.
"Ok James remember this is a standard get in and out mission so don't draw attention."
"I know Catherine but why am I not on overwatch then?"
"Because of..wait..1..2..3..last time," said Catherine as she shot a dreg.
"Come on we still completed the mission," said James as he hid the body.
"We have two different perceptions of a completed mission."
The conversation stopped when Catherine became more focused on taking out the Fallen that were in James' way. It only started again when James got close to the ketch.
"Ok james just pick a terminal when you get in there."
"Got I will contact you if something happens," said James as he entered the ketch.
"Catherine I'm getting a transmission from the vanguard."
"You answer it Beth."
"Ok. Sorry but Catherine can't get on the comms right now. But this is her personal assistant and ghost Beth can I take your message? Ok..Ok...I will tell her."
"What do they want?"
"They want us to report back to the tower in the next ten minutes."
"Hmph. James status?"
"The download just finished."
"Good and you...," Catherine stopped talking when she heard the ship's alarm over the comm.
"Ahh permission to go loud?"
"Go ahead and the vangaurd wants us to report in so hurry up."
"Will try."
Part.2 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/189620099/0/0
Table https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/178326350/0/0
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Very nice I like it! Be mindful of accidental misspellings though (I think a "He" is where "she" should be, small things like that it will make it clearer for the reader)
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This is a great start. This has great potential!
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Awesome, love the suspense action. Feels Spy like.