I'm not trying to be a dick, but just trying to help. First- The whole thing consists of bad grenades, and the rest stuff you'd see on Destiny every time you play it. Again, not trying to be rude, but from what I can tell... You're sort of desperate to get your name out there, collect some actually genuine clips, then edit them. Second- It's just average clips with either, "bruh," "yeet," or "really n***a." Add some commentary, soundtracks, and again, some actually unique moments. I could go and record 15 minutes of gameplay and accidentally cover most if not all you did in that clip. Give me five minutes to do it all on purpose. Trying to be constructive, and I've never shared gameplay before, so it's not like my opinion is top notch by any means, but this is coming from a viewer.