All that talk about Xylar and I never saw a drawing until I forced my friend to draw him. Hope you all like him :)
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Hey man that's pretty decent. You've got a clear understanding of shading but try to avoid smudging to achieve the effect, you'll learn valuable pen control by doing it manually. There's some good line work, maybe outlining it with dark ink and maybe some colour would make it pop. Keep it up =)