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[b][url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-RQG-AAWNfS1NjWOEQLi8PEewItjPeSuX5yV0u5gWIc/edit?usp=sharing]Manan Gén't[/url][/b] [b][i]Manan walks up the mountain path, Nuske resting on his shoulder and Pena following close behind. The snowstorm blows quickly and powerfully around them. He stands at the doors, knocking on them.[/i][/b] "Yo! Anybody home?" [spoiler]This is an entry post for the admins.[/spoiler]
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  • [b][i]The gates open slowly as a tired-looking man, mid-twenties, walks out of the dojo. His hair is a dark gray, his skin light olive. His left eye is bright green, but the other eye is the strange part of his head. The skin around the right was completely burnt off, a 3-inch diameter showing the soulsteel underneath. The eye itself was a mechanical, completely red sphere, which acted as a camera, attached to the man's brain. He wore a black, sleeveless shirt, and black jeans, a brown belt with many pockets to store small items strapped to his waist. His arms were completely mechanical, up to his shoulders, and while his legs were hidden by his jeans, it was clear that they were mechanical, as well. In his left hand, he holds an E12 clarinet with size 6 reeds. The tired man looks up to the new face arriving at the dojo, sighing. He had other things to worry about, but that did not mean he could blow off his duties. So he nodded, his dark gray hair blowing in the calm, east to west breeze.[/i][/b] "I take it you wish to enter?" [b][i]He asks. His voice was intelligent, like that of a scientist's. It was clear that he wasn't much of a fighter, but would fight for the right reasons. And he would fight well, as in, polished, smooth, and gracefully, unlike many he knew. He was not a bloodthirsty beast, but a refined researcher with a gun or two.[/i][/b] [spoiler]Yeah, I don't like how anybody here handled this. I'm here to help.[/spoiler]

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  • "Sorta. I forgot my coat inside." [b][i]Manan chuckled.[/i][/b]

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  • "Sure," [b][i]The man replied, chuckling as well.[/i][/b] "Well, I'm sure you know how this works by now."

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  • "Punch, punch, smash?" [b][i]Manan extended his blades, and their orange light emanated in the snowstorm.[/i][/b] "I got this."

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  • "Alright." [b][i]From his belt, the man pulled out two cubes, which rebuilt themselves into two twin revolvers.[/i][/b]

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  • "Well, that's a little high-tech." [b][i]Manan shrugged.[/i][/b] "But I guess this [i]is[/i] a dimensional meeting point." [b][i]Manan pulled Beamrifle from his back, and took aim.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]He snorts.[/i][/b] "You should see my other stuff," [b][i]He says as his mechanical, red eye begins targeting. It zooms in and out on Manan, targeting weak points. The man fired twice with each revolver, the bullets traveling along predetermined paths. One flew towards Manan's forehead, another his neck. One towards his abdomen, and the last one flew towards his heart.[/i][/b]

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  • Edited by mannagement: 8/21/2016 4:39:54 AM
    [b][i]Manan put up his hard light shield. Every bullet bounced off the shield, save for the first one that was fired. It bounced off his helmet, leaving only a small scratch. Manan lowered the shield and fired a supersonic bullet at his heart.[/i][/b]

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  • Edited by Cazberry Pie: 8/21/2016 4:42:47 AM
    [b][i]His mechanical eye saw Manan fire, sending commands towards his legs to move. He barely dodge the blast; it singes his right, robotic arm. It would require repairs. Omnus took out his omniwrench, and began working at the arm. His green eye kept watch on the subject of his repairs, while his mechanical one was ever-vigilant.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]Manan flies in the air, pointing his hand at his left leg. A concentrated beam of plasma shot from his hand at near the speed of light.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]It burns it, and Omnus groans.[/i][/b] "Look, I'm made of soulsteel. I'll get it out of the way. Soulsteel with a soul infused with it is unbreakable. Don't aim at my metallic parts, which consist of my back, arms, and legs." [b][i]He continues repairs, now needing to deliver maintenance to his leg.[/i][/b]

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  • "That sounds a lot like [FAKE METAL HERE]." [b][i]Manan aimed at the fleshy part of his head and fired with his other hand.[/i][/b]

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  • "Guess what? It is a fake metal. And guess what else? You're a fake alien person with wings," [b][i]He says as he sidesteps, finally finishing repairs.[/i][/b] "Gee golly, that was so annoying." [b][i]He flips his twin revolvers, firing another 4 shots at Manan, aimed at the same spots.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]Manan takes 3 of the shots as they impale his armour. The 4th lands in his leg. He falls towards Omnus, extending a plasma blade and impaling his chest. Finally registering the shot, he falls down in the snow, the adrenaline wearing off.[/i][/b]

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  • [spoiler]Really bro? You just assumed the outcome of your attack. Notice how I simply said I shot, and told you where the shots were aimed. Instead, you straight up impaled me in the chest.[/spoiler]

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  • [spoiler]I thought you were gonna explain away with soul steel again. My blades aren't light; they're a part of the symbiote inside Manan. Anyway, Manan is damaged and you're unaffected. Go.[/spoiler]

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  • [b][i]He sidestepped the blade, twirling his revolvers as he attempted to slam the butt of his guns into Manan.[/i][/b]

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  • Edited by mannagement: 8/21/2016 5:09:32 AM
    [spoiler]Btw, I added a little to Manan's repertoire. It was actually why I was going for from the start. Under "plasma (which has been changed) blades" and "notable battles"[/spoiler] [b][i]Omnus hit him in the in back, and Manan fell to the ground.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]Omnus stowed his revolvers, pulling another cube from his belt. This one turns into a large, gray claymore.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]Manan's wings started to ember.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]He charged, his sword glowing with red and black flames, as his mechanical legs kept him moving at a steady 65 miles an hour.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]Manan was completely on fire as Omnus reached him. He turned around, his blade extended and aimed at his right arm, hoping to disable it. He pushed the blade forward as Omnus reached him.[/i][/b]

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  • [b][i]Omnus ducked the sword and slid underneath Manan, utilizing his slim build and his massive momentum to get behind him, as he jumped up, spinning a 180°. Using the momentum of the spin, he swung his sword at his opponent, which would increase both the speed of the swing and its impact if he hit Manan.[/i][/b]

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  • [i][b]Manan put up his hardlight shield and the sword bounced off. He extended one of the symbiote blades and spun around, the blade heading right for his left arm.[/b][/i]

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  • [b][i]He turned his body so the outside of his left arm was facing the blade, and a shield built itself on it. The shield was painted white, with golden rings on the outside and a golden wolf insignia in the middle. The shield blocked the sword, and Omnus aimed a kick that would have much increased power, due to it being mechanical.[/i][/b]

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