originally posted in:The New Dojo
Names: Gore Arsetan, Daniel Rider
Aliases: Mortar, Morty, Ex God slash war beast slash demon thing.
Male
Age: Overall, 20,079. This body: 33
Appearance: [spoiler]Mortar is unlike many around him. He is a rather thin man, reaching five feet ten inches. His muscles don't seem as pronounced under his black skin tight valhite cotton shirt, mask, and pants, but he can easily lift up heavier objects. He wears a red sash, the back of it hangs multiple daggers and throwing knives, which don't seem to shine in the sunlight. Also on his back is his plasma sniper given to him by a friend from a forgotten time. Though the first things people notice are his blazing blood red eyes.[/spoiler]
Background: [spoiler][url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s39t9Nk-awdfe-tRAR0MBZi3suz9tzc6IdX2gKQlXr8/edit?usp=drive_web]Pretty long, so I put it in a google doc.[/url][/spoiler]
Weapons: [spoiler]Mortar doesn't really prefer ranged over meelee, nor vice versa.
He does have an interesting sword though that his friend was able to tattoo on his back to summon it. It is four and a half feet long, dark blue, lighter than navy blue. It seems to be a mix of a katana and a broadsword. When it's being used it will normally have emerald green flames dancing around the blade. The blade was given to him by a strange merchant when he first joined the Dojo, and he reforged it to meet his criteria
He has a plethora of throwing knives and daggers, though he doesn't use them often in combat.
He has a plasma sniper as well. It's an off white color, with a purple hardlight scope. The barrel of the gun is dark grey and about one and a half feet long.[/spoiler]
Abilities: [spoiler]When it comes to abilities, Mortar is very useful with his.
He can "dissolve" into the ground and reform anywhere on the ground almost instantly. It's like teleportation but it needs a solid medium.
He can form massive iron balls in thin air, and make them levitate, heat up and melt, or explode, sometimes at the same time.
He has a small third lung that contains a strange symbiotic fungus. If expelled from his mouth, usually by coughing, it makes the victims tired and it makes open wounds more painful. And because the spores are all expelled at once, they block the victim's vision.
When he punches the ground he can make a magnitude 8 earthquake.
He can convert his sight to Infrared sight to find anything invisible to the naked eye.
Security cameras black out when he is half a mile away. No one knows why.
When he is electrocuted it causes a reaction in his brain that allows him to grow bigger and stronger. In this form he has a large cannon on his back, you don't need to be explained as to what a cannon is.
And finally, he can turn into a massive dragon like creature he calls Bahamortar. Bahamortar is 50 feet tall, has arms like tree trunks, has talons for feet, has four large leathery wings, and two teeth larger than the rest, protruding from the sides of his mouth like a saber tooth tiger. He also has the cannon on his back[/spoiler]
Personality: [spoiler] Mortar's personality is flexible, and is apt to change depending on who he's talking to. He is usually cryptic to new people, very friendly with friends and family, and undying anger and rage with many of his enemies. He is very close to his friends and will guard them with his life, so it really hits him hard if one were to die or betray him.[/spoiler]
Other: [spoiler]Mortar likes to invent things. He invented the Portal Stick Thingy, or PST[/spoiler]
Family: [spoiler]Cyan, his sister, and Mion, his companion and catwing.[/spoiler]
English
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No... just... no...
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What? I just said that because yours was a mccree ripoff. I actually put some thought into mine
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Edited by Zebra: 10/15/2016 12:50:30 PMAlright. I'll break it down for you. Yes, my character is McCree. However, the only real characteristic they share is the revolver and their personality; clone or not. However, mine at least shows some continuity. Mortar, however, although very creative, is a moshpit of abilities thrown in; it's as if as you went along you wanted him to be a tiger with a cannon on his back, but wait, he also needs a sword and an arrangement of weaponry that we will probably never use. Oh, and let's make him a demon. And yes, Card is my character, just as Mortar is your character. I assume you now think that I give no thought whatsoever to my characters. I can easily link 3-4 characters I have created that could maybe meet your expectations. I'm sorry that in a moment of laziness I made Card (which I do not regret) and that it does not appease your standards for a character, but it gives you no right to judge mine, just because I don't have a 5 paragraph backstory. Thank you for your time, and I hope you have a good day.
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In my defense, this is a character I've built up for eight months. Weapons on him were given to him by other characters, including his primary sword. The cannon and strength given by original augmentations, but that was about it when I started with him. And it's a LOT more than five paragraphs. I got bored, wanted to write a short story, and it ended up being his bio.
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Alright. Now how does that give you the right to judge mine? I'm still in school, and I made Card during my only free time of the day, my study hall. I had just joined the Dojo, and I was just trying to jump into the action.
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True, and i didn't mean to judge, however if you did make it during your free time, I suggest adding on to it a little more, make it a little more original. We have only one badass cowboy here and his name is JT
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Woah now. Card is a character made almost purely for humor. JT can be a badass cowboy all he wants, but Card isn't JT.
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Dude, it was a joke, don't take it so hard
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Yes, now you say that, of course. I've RPed with you before. I thought you were a decent guy. Not sure now. Have a good day.
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I'm normally decent, I just like to defend myself
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There you go. Just like I like to defend myself.
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Exactly. And i apologize if I sounded like I was judging you; I'm not the biggest fan of people who will rip off characters from movies or games and change them around to sound original (even though I use ISIC from Battleborn... Dunno why) or blatantly use them, abilities and all (again, ISIC) for almost all my characters they've been original
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Card was like the one character who I've ripped off of, lol.
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Yeah, I guess... But I've seen guardians, sighs, Spartans, the Legate (Fallout stuff that ASAP did) etc.
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That gets annoying, I bet.
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