Part 7 is here! Enjoy a taste of Solm's perspective and just a dash of powerful heroism.
Part 7: [url]https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z_eES4F7l1N8YRc2UkZ6etfGGDLuzB8cjQ_r5dSlWvA/edit?usp=sharing[/url]
Check out the other parts here: [url]https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/214044178?showBanned=0&path=0[/url]
I'm pretty burnt out what with school and all, so the next installment probably won't come around for another few days. Until then, enjoy what I have written already. Don't hesitate to comment with questions, feedback, or just a simple "Yo, Ghost, you're an idiot and I hate you." Remember, I won't feel bad if you downvote my posts, so try verbally harassing me instead!
-Much love, Ghost Writer.
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Yo Ghost, you're an intelligent life form and I don't dislike you.
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Wow just wow it's getting so good! I can't wait for what will happen next!
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I really like how you incorporate modern ideas like conflict over sexuality into your work. Lol, I'm starting to sound like one of those literary analysts. Anyway, great work! Each one is better than the last!
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So good
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Edited by GrizzlyIsland5: 10/4/2016 4:33:45 AMHey, these are good, I've been enjoying them. Even if it takes a week or so between new ones I hope you keep writing them, because I'll keep looking for 'em.
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This is on par with Helikaon's work of Fireteam X
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You've got a lot of people behind you. Go big or go home! Make this somehow even more awesome!
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This is really good you should continue these
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[quote] "Yo, Ghost, you're an idiot and I hate you." .[/quote] Anyone else read this part in Sister's voice from RvB?
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Awesome. I've been really enjoying these so far. It's awesome your making all the classes great in their own way. Keep on writing.
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I'm really liking all this. But one thing I'm struggling with a little is perspectives- not confident on who's doing what, who got sent to find what, etc. I'm halfway confident Vera's the Exo who talked to Cayde to go find some sweet gun, but aside that I'm kinda 'wait...so was that X? Is Y the warlock again?' Great work tho
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Bump 4 l8er
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Man, if my Titan could do that in the game I'd play as him more often.
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Yo ghost, your a -blam!-in loser and a lil bitch, these stories are trash and you should kill yourself [spoiler]jokes[/spoiler] [spoiler]these are amazing, -blam!- school I want part 8[/spoiler]
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Edited by Selah Stone: 10/3/2016 2:39:35 AMThat was totally wicked!!!!!!! And wow I was so impressed by Solm. And wow they way you talk about his super. WOW just WOW I'm sorry that your feeling burnt out. I can understand the amount of energy it takes to get through college. But thank you for sharing your work. On part 6 I commented that it's awesome how you can get the reader to "see" what your characters are doing, and omg that is so true. I felt each impact of Solm's hammer. I felt the ether bursts from the fallen (you know the pop that happens as the head explodes). While I'm sure a ton of us would love it if you released more like right now lol. Take your time and go easy on yourself. Keep your light up Guardian
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I comment every time, but these inspire me and I look forward to them impatiently
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Wow can't wait to read it!
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These are awsome
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Overwellmingly hype for recording 8!