originally posted in:The New Dojo
[spoiler]It wasn't the Quish who attacked Tubbs. It was a random Blob lol. And each side thinks the other side started it.[/spoiler]
[spoiler]Because Works's side didn't know Tubbs got attacked so when he attacked them back for revenge they thought he started it.[/spoiler]
Hmm. I'll help, but first I need your help with something.
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[spoiler]then why are the quish around? And why did the blob attack?[/spoiler] "[b]of course. What is it?[/b]"
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[spoiler]The Quish wants to wipe out the Blob. They're trying to track them down still.[/spoiler] [spoiler]The single Blob that attacked Tubbs thought he could kill Tubbs because he was against him. But he didn't tell anyone and went in alone, causing a war because Tubbs thought he was sent by Greenda or someone.[/spoiler] Diamond, leave us. [b]Diamond puts you on Goliath's shoulder and slithers away[/b] Do you know a lot about snakes? [b]Goliath starts walking around with you on his shoulder[/b]
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[spoiler]that's a bit boring. Can you consider changing it? Partially because the whole threat of the quish as a grandmaster is generally more intresting, and partially because I've modeled by entire plot for this around the idea the quish were grandmasters[/spoiler] "[b]I know everything about snakes[/b]"
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[spoiler]1.) I can't change it because I already set it to be like that 2.) I said the Quish hadn't found the Blobs yet so they couldn't have started it. Sorry for it being boring. 3.) He can still believe that.[/spoiler] Good, for some reason Diamond has stopped eating. Would you happen to know why?
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[spoiler]well, we can settle on the fact the quish ae planning to [u]captualise[/u] on the war.[/spoiler] "[b]I can find out[/b]"
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[spoiler]Idk what that means lol[/spoiler] She's been giving me her food and started sleeping with me too.
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[spoiler] captialise: make use of, use to help you[/spoiler] "May I take an inspection?"
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[spoiler]Well then yeah, they'll do that.[/spoiler] Yes, of course. [b]he starts walking to his home[/b] [b]he eventually stops at a group of trees in a circle, with snake skin connected from tree to tree as the walls[/b] [b]he then walks in between 2 trees without anything for walls, you see Diamond up in one of the trees[/b] Here we are, home sweet home.
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"Perhaps it's because her home is covered in the skin of her animal relatives."
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This is the skin she sheds. And she wanted to make it.
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"Ok" (He walks towards the snake, looking for any abnormalities)
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[b]she looks normal, but watches your every move[/b]
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(He looks inside her mouth)
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[b]it looks normal, lots of teeth, sharp teeth[/b]
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"Did anything major happen before it started to not eat?"
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We died defending the Blobs. Then they summoned us back and she wasn't eating
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"Perhaps trauma. Do you retain physical injury when you resurrect?"
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No. Good as new.
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"Do you feel at all shaken by the fact you have died?"
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I don't. The others might.
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"That's rather peculiar." (He looks in her eyes, looking for signs of trauma)
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Edited by JealousOrc: 10/22/2016 7:10:48 PM[b]she hisses at you[/b] [b]her eyes looks normal[/b]
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"Strange. How old is she?"
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We're hundreds of years old.
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"I presume she doesn't show any signs of ageing."