originally posted in:The New Dojo
Normally I would be looking at things super objectively right now, but I just woke up to a pleasant read and I'm in no mood to think lmao. Even though I don't know your villains that well (apart from some info on Creed) I feel that this did a hella of a job portraying them in a short time - as it should be. They were both memorable with their actions and well-distinguished from each other.
Would've preferred a little more description of Rook, Glitch and the rest of Omicron but that's somewhat biased coming from me seeing that I don't know them that well.
Job well done. I look forward to seeing more of this in the future.
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Thank you! Omicron isn't super important at the moment, but there will certainly be more of Salem and Creed coming in!