Aw schnitzel
That's actually really solid, although I'm kinda sad to see Damien go. On the other hand, can't wait to see what's coming...
The writing is on par with what I expected from you, and by that, I mean descriptive and definitely intriguing. Like Cobalt said, maybe a little more on Omicron, and from me, maybe a little bit more description of the slaughter.
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Thank you! As for Omicron, they will serve a different role down the road. As for gore, I'm still working on Creed's killing ability. As I developed I'll perfect how he takes down enemies, but for now he's a clean killer. But, I'll make sure to put it more into detail next time! :P