originally posted in:The New Dojo
Aw schnitzel
That's actually really solid, although I'm kinda sad to see Damien go. On the other hand, can't wait to see what's coming...
The writing is on par with what I expected from you, and by that, I mean descriptive and definitely intriguing. Like Cobalt said, maybe a little more on Omicron, and from me, maybe a little bit more description of the slaughter.
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Thank you! As for Omicron, they will serve a different role down the road. As for gore, I'm still working on Creed's killing ability. As I developed I'll perfect how he takes down enemies, but for now he's a clean killer. But, I'll make sure to put it more into detail next time! :P