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Edited by Chinkronomicon: 12/7/2016 12:51:45 AM
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[b][u]Prodigal Son | Ko Rudo Mountains, Tatakai[/u][/b] Lucien wandered the endless expanse contained within Tatakai's mountain range. His boots treaded lightly upon the hard rock, ending what little silence was held with such minute noise. His thick leather coat blew slightly in the dormant breeze, the guns strapped to his bandoliers resisting the low temperatures of the mountain. He dwelled upon his sins. He dwelled upon his failure to protect Alister, whisked away and wrapped up in business that was not even his to conduct. Until a presence overcame the entire area. The man felt the hair stand on the back of his skin, immediately drawing his sword in one hand and revolver in the other. Violet-blue flames danced around the edge of his blade as his mind fought with itself, trying not to be torn apart by the mere presence of the anomaly. It was as if whatever was causing the presence was an anathema - its very existence was a crime to life itself. It should not be, yet it was. A six white flashes lit up in front of Lucien, each one heralding a flaming round that traced the air with blue flames. He raised his sword in a blur to at least deflect a few of them, only to be met with the superheated rounds impacting so quickly he did not even have time to register. He fell to one knee and stabbed his sword into the ground to balance himself. Expecting his regeneration to have already mended his wounds, he attempted to get up but struggled - the shooter had targeted points on his body that would have trouble regenerating from burning attacks. Whoever they were, they had knowledge of Lucien's anatomy and mutated cells. But blue fire? He knew there were others that wielded flame of the same colour, but on a cellular level he felt his own mutated flesh writhe in agony. These flames were the product of someone like him, someone who had been inoculated with the same strain of the mutated stem cell virus in order to produce the signature cobalt flames. Such a thing was not possible, however. He would have to be dead in order for someone to gain his inoculation. "Who are you?" Lucien asked as he tilted his head upwards to view his assailant. The figure in front of him had the height of a boy, only about 5'6. A height like that normally would not have intimidated anyone, but something about this stranger was unsettling. The overcoat adorning his body was thick and leathery, similar to Lucien's, but did not seem to be made of any regular material. The rough texture upon its black surface reminded Lucien of the dragons of the Old Earth, fictional creatures created in literature and fantasy. Yet here this man stood with an overcoat bearing the scales of a beast as well as a necklace of reptilian talons. The coat seemed to have ceramic shoulder guards upon it, with one pauldrons having the emblem of a coiled red cobra painted upon it. However, it had a knife slash gouged through it, giving the appearance of the cobra's head severed from its body. Beneath the open overcoat was a somewhat peculiar shirt. A grey t-shirt with the caricature of a gas mask with the word "PYROMANIAC" written under it in a chicken-scratch scrawl. What was most unsettling was his mask. An armoured helm clad in metal, with various attachments and antennae all converging into one militaristic helmet. What had Lucien's attention the most was the single bright blue optic at the centre of his face, gazing into his soul like an intense Cyclops. In his hand was a Mateba revolver with feathery engravings, flames licking the barrel from the barrage from before. Lucien's eyes wandered to the breast pocket of the stranger's coat as he continued to struggle to get up. On his lapel was yet another emblem, a cobalt Phoenix surrounded by a lighter blue flame. "Ah, so you are this Cobalt Phoenix I hear so much of." "He said to them, “Why are you troubled, and why do doubts rise in your minds? Look at my hands and my feet. It is I myself! Touch me and see; a ghost does not have flesh and bones, as you see I have," the man quoted. His voice was gravelly and rough, like he had not spoken in decades. "Luke chapter 24, verses 38-39. The Old World Bible," Lucien stated. He had learned the Holy literature of Earth with his time spent collecting information from Iconoclast data caches back on Mars. "Correct, Lucien Farcòn. While I am not the Messiah nor proclaim to be, I am Reckoning incarnate - your reckoning, in fact. Beyond ethereal yet not corporeal, made flesh but not entirely." Willing his body to create a brittle exoskeleton of bone around his wounded limbs, he leapt forward and fired a .410 shotgun shell from his revolver before slashing upwards with his flaming curved sword. The Phoenix was seemingly not taken aback by the buckshot at all, so he met Lucien's sword by raising his hand - a katana burning into existence within it just in time to block the attack. It had Oriental depictions that ran all along the blade, almost exactly like Lucien's. [i]Buckshot was stopped by the leather - or something behind it?[/i] Lucien thought to himself quickly as he saw the remnants of his ineffective .410 shot embedded in the man's coat. While his opponent was shorter, he had enough strength to wield his katana with one hand with his pistol in the other. "It is funny how hypocritical you are. Hunting down others, claiming to destroy the demons within them using your own," the Phoenix stranger said as the heat around his own blade began to distort the air around the two. Fire radiated between them in waves, swirling them in a circle and eventually burning away to reveal a different scene. Houses, some half-finished remnants covered in Martian dirt and completed by haphazard wood and others being pure shacks of scrap material. It mattered not, however. Everything was drenched in blood and engulfed in blue flames. Rivers of red flowed down the dirt paths of the settlement, with half-eaten corpses serving as islands of offal amidst a sea of blood. Lucien's eyes widened in horror as he realized where he was. "No... No..." "Yes indeed. Auburn Steppes of Olympus Island - the settlement you massacred and burnt to the ground." Shuddering in terror, Lucien backed up a few steps away from the stranger and almost slipped on a hand that was separated from its body. He caught himself quickly enough, disgusted by the scene around him - the massacre he had caused all those years ago. "I was... I was someone different back then. So full of hatred... I know I can never atone for my sins, but I never rest in ensuring that nobody ever does this again -" "Ensure? Please, Lucien. You are nothing but a self-entitled bastard who thinks of himself as a justiciar, hunting down those who can't control their powers. The only atonement that awaits you is death." Lucien's arms and legs became a blur as he rushed towards the stranger, firing a .410 shotgun shell at him before slashing sideways with his flaming sword. Phoenix's own sword clashed, creating another small explosion of fire. [i]Buckshot pellets got stuck in the coat... either tough material, or there is a layer of something like my nano-cellulose stopping the pellets.[/i] "Who are you?" Lucien shouted as he tried firing his pistol into Phoenix's gut point-blank beneath the clashing blades. His arm was knocked to the side by Phoenix's own, which also held a revolver. With a single trigger squeeze a powerful shotgun shell of thermite and ceramic shards drove through Lucien's body, scorching organs and burning his tainted blood. This knocked Lucien back, making him fall to one knee and holding his sword's tip to his chest. The stranger, Phoenix, laughed before his chuckling turned into a hacking cough. "Do it, Lucien. Embrace your hatred. Show me that your inner demons thrive within you! SHOW ME THE REAL YOU!" "SHUT UP! YOU KNOW NOTHING OF MY SINS!" "On the contrary, Lucien," Phoenix whispered as he positioned his own katana over his belly. "I know them the best." (CONTINUED BELOW)
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  • Edited by Chinkronomicon: 12/7/2016 12:52:25 AM
    Both warriors drove their blades into their stomachs simultaneously. From Lucien, a miasma of heated fog exuded from his body and enveloped him. From Phoenix, ash rose from the ground and surrounded his figure with various weapons. The only thing common from the both of them were the flames surrounding their bodies - flames of pure hatred. Lucien's form grew two large avian wings, made of burnt-black flesh and soot-ridden feathers. A pair of colossal arms unfolded from his lower middle back, seemingly made up of thousands of thrashing arms all amalgamated into two limbs. Two of the arms withdrew Lucien's .50 Desert Eagles while others picked up his 2-gauge shotgun. One even reached into his holster to draw his Mateba revolver. Whatever demon Lucien had become laughed in a thousand different tongues. It unfolded its wings as they were set alight with corrupted cobalt flame - as did his sword, who's flames only heightened and seemed to whisper with every crackling ember emitted from it. He took his grenade launcher out from his belt with his left hand. With the wings, the massive limbs and the flaming sword paired with the grenade launcher, he looked like some demented Angel of Eden. From Phoenix's body came wings slightly smaller than Lucien's, but burnt brightly in the sulphurous fog. A pair of cobalt-flame wings spread from his back in a blaze of glory, along with six tails of the same flame growing from his lower back and draping around his body. A small firestorm swathed him through the blue fire, shapes of different weapons appearing in the swirling cinders: a chainsword shaped like a bastard sword, a crystalline single-edged longsword, a makeshift post-apocalyptic blade with a human skull at the base of the metal holding a fuel barrel - these were but a few of the blades that danced around Phoenix. He withdrew his own blade from his stomach, which became engulfed in what could only be described as a self-contained firestorm. Blood boiled on the ground and steam rose through the air just from its mere presence. Cobalt fire swirled tightly around his katana, the Oriental runes upon it glowing as bright as the sun itself. If Lucien was a twisted Angel, Phoenix was an avenging demon come to purify with his flames. Every shot fired from Lucien and his massive appendages collided with a solid afterimage of Phoenix, comprised of ash and destroyed in a blaze of fire. He was a blur of flame, leaving only shadows of ember where he was last. He cut through the revolver rounds and the Deagle bullets, but when he sliced through an anti-tank round it exploded in his face and kicked up a dervish of dust. When it cleared, Phoenix stood taller with some kind of militaristic exosuit beneath his large overcoat. It was definitely not there before, yet it had somehow burnt into existence like Phoenix's sword. Angered by this, the transformed False Prophet roared in a thousand tongues. He rushed forward, propelled by his Eldritch wings, and fired a biomass grenade from his grenade launcher in a calculated spot behind Phoenix. It worked as planned - Phoenix was sent flying forward towards him. He slashed and left a scorching scar in the air that burnt the very hydrogen around them, but somehow Phoenix used his own flaming wings to twist himself in mid-air to avoid the crescent wave of blasts... No, that was not quite it. It was as if his wings were absorbing the superheated fire itself. Phoenix sailed into Lucien's right wing and drew his sword in an upward Iaido draw slash in mid-air, a wave of explosions radiating from his blade and ripping through the False Prophet's right wing and Angel-Arm. He slammed into the amputated wing and slid on the ground with it, his wings burning brightly as they incinerated the fleshy appendage beneath them. He then flipped off of it when it was no more than a few smouldering cinders, doing the same to the cut off arm before it could regenerate. Now furious at the loss of his wing, the berserker Lucien had become whirled to face Phoenix. He slashed upwards with his sword, summoning burnt-black bone spikes from the ground. The other pyro stabbed the ground with his katana, turning the earth around him to ash and bringing forth dozens of ash sparrows with blue fire in their eyes. The sparrows bombarded Lucien and detonated every time they impacted him, but when they were all gone all Lucien saw was the impaled corpse of Phoenix. He moved forward to devour the body, only to see the corpse be whisked away by a fiery wind, turning it into ash. Yet not turning it to ash... For it was ash all along. An ashen copy of some kind. Before Lucien could do anything, a superheated spread-shot tore through the back of his left knee and brought him down to one leg. Immediately after, Phoenix slashed and shot at the remaining wing and the Angel-Arm, incinerating chunks with every blow from both bullet and blade. Now knocked out of his rage, Lucien raised his head up once more to ask again: "Who are you?" Phoenix promptly replied by raising himself up with his wings and roundhouse kicking Lucien into the side of a nearby house, sending him through the wall and into the flaming wreckage. The man strode into the house with his wings still burning, yet they were slowly fading away and getting smaller. Lucien, bloodied and burnt, coughed up boiling blood as he looked back up at Phoenix. And through his pain he heard a child crying. Phoenix quietly brought his hands to his helmet and undid the magnetic locks, taking off his heavy mask and looking down at Lucien. He was no more than a young man, about 20 with tanned Filipino skin and short, spiky black hair. Yet even in the firelight Lucien could see the prominent greys within it, as well as his light hazel irises. Light hazel and black hair. Like his own. He took a closer look at the man as he burnt, and shed a single bloody tear. "I'm sorry, Mikhail..." he quietly said. The man had so many similarities to his brother - the brother he had murdered out of vengeance all those years ago, Mikhail Danet. The brother he had killed in what seemed like another lifetime after massacring his home - the bloodstained settlement they had been battling in. It was only fitting that his dead brother took his life after all these years. A final act of vengeance. "I'm so sorry..." Lucien coughed, "I could not even protect Alister..." "You did. You protected him to your last breath." "...what?" Lucien was perplexed by the man's answer. "I could not... Find him... Lost here in the Dojo..." "I am not your brother, Lucien." "Then who... Are you?" The armour seemed to burn out of existence as it had before, the remnant embers of Phoenix's wings waning and fading away. Now that he was out of his armour he was much shorter, still only around 5'7. He looked much more like a boy - a boy that resembled Lucien's brother... "Al... Alister?" ""He said to them, “Why are you troubled, and why do doubts rise in your minds? Look at my hands and my feet. It is I myself! Touch me and see; a ghost does not have flesh and bones, as you see I have," he said quietly just as he said earlier, "I am Alister no longer, Lucien. When you died I took upon your fire. I came here to the Dojo and created a new name for myself. I loved, and I fell victim to my own hatred when that love was taken away. I destroyed just as I created, and I am sorry for becoming the very monster you had not wanted me to become. I lived the life of a peacekeeper, the life of a war commander, the life of a martyr and the life of a pariah. My name is Luis Franco, legacy to the dead Lucien Farcòn, name taken and bastardized in honour of my mentor. But I lived as the Cobalt Phoenix... And died as such." The baby's crying got louder as Lucien remembered his promise to his dying brother. The promise to take care of his son when he grew up, to teach him the ways of the dying world. To ensure that he would prosper, survive, and never become a monster like him. "No... It is impossible... Alister... I am so sorry..." The entire area around them faded away in a rush of flames, bringing them back to the Ko Rudo Mountains. Lucien would most likely not survive... But Phoenix knew there was another way. Master and apprentice would be reunited once more. He took Lucien's sword and held it to his dead heart. His body had died long ago, falling from orbit and into the oceans of the Golden City. He had rested in the depths of Terra only to be awakened partially as a spirit; a mere ghost to keep watch over the Dojo's gate. But with the arrival of Lucien, something had sparked within what remained of Phoenix's bosom. A deep guilt and sense of treachery to himself and those around him. So he would live once more through Lucien and atone alongside his mentor. Phoenix drove the living sword through his rotted flesh as the illusion broke, his face returning to the waterlogged skull with runes etched upon his bones. He fell to the ground as he saw ash beginning to gather around Lucien, repairing his limbs and feeding him the biomass of everything his flames had consumed over his lifetime. He would become the Phoenix once again. They would become the Phoenix together. [spoiler]Closed. Open to comments or questions on what the Hell just happened. [/spoiler]

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  • Bruh. Even my GF loved this. I MISS YOU!!!!!

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  • Aw thanks b. Glad y'all enjoyed it.

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  • Our honor to read your magnificent work.

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  • [spoiler]I CHALLENGE THEE TO ANOTHER FIGHT[/spoiler]

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  • [spoiler]OH HERE WE GO OH HERE WE GO OH HERE WE GO AGAIN[/spoiler]

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  • [quote][spoiler]I CHALLENGE THEE TO ANOTHER FIGHT[/spoiler][/quote] I SECOND!!!!

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  • So, cobalt Phoenix was Ali. Lucien was supposed to protect Ali.

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  • Yeah. In the novel I'm writing he's Alister. Essentially Lucien went on a rampage and massacred a settlement. When he was standing over his brother and heard Alister crying as a baby, making him realize the weight of his actions. Fast forward into my start of RP, Phoenix does a lot of stuff, dies, and then somehow now Lucien is back. Which will be explained later.

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  • Cool beans. Very solid work

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  • Thank you, my guy.

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