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originally posted in:The New Dojo
12/8/2016 1:35:06 AM
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[b][u]GRAND FINALE: PART THREE[/u][/b]
Suddenly, the dust cleared. And so did the fighters powers given to them by the stars, and they stopped falling as well. Both sustained serious injuries, and the arena cleared into an empty white space. Nothing was there. Only them, their weapons, their blood,
And their determination to win.
However, both had their normal powers still activated. At least to the point where the stars wouldn't assist.
And Zane had an ace up his sleeve....
[spoiler]Final post. I'd recommend wrapping this up in twenty-thirty posts. If not I'll unfortunately have to judge the fight. And I'd rather one or the other beat eachother.[/spoiler]
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Edited by jj1042: 12/8/2016 2:04:18 AMRedact.
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[spoiler]wrong place to reply ya dolt.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Shit, I thought it was my turn.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]He got here first sorry lol [/spoiler]
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Edited by XxZANExX13: 12/9/2016 9:14:12 AMHe jumps away from JJ, his aura glowing as he breaths heavily. He has fallen back to stage two of redemption, as his body was starting to become tired. "It's time to end this. Whoever still stands, this was still a good fight." A bright flash covers Zane, temporary blinding JJ. Once the light fades JJ can see that Zane had changed a bit. A black and white overcoat now covered him, and his hair was still silver. He floated slightly above the ground, and formed two energy sabers from his hands. [b]Neutral form: Redemption augmented stage 2[/b] In the blink of an eye he's upon JJ, delivering a heavy kick that knocks him into the air.
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Edited by jj1042: 12/8/2016 2:05:13 AMThe kick lands, sending JJ into a wall. He struggles to his feet. The wounds had started to catch up to him, causing him to be unsteady and disoriented. "Well... The fire ain't gonna cut it. If something bad happens, I'm sorry, it's hard to control by this point." The flames fade from JJ, replaced by the red and black energy. JJ then falls to his knees, screaming. He was clutching his head, shaking as if he was experiencing extreme pain. Then, nothing. JJ stood up, a disconnected and frankly terrifying look in his eyes. Rage was glowing so bright it would be hard to look at, if Despair wasn't eating the light with its black energy. There were no words spoken from JJ at this point, as if he wasn't even there. Like his body was just a husk, without someone there to pilot it. Meanwhile, Rage began to work on JJ's more major wounds, healing them very slowly, and allowing him to operate at a better capacity. He then throws Despair to the right of Zane, and teleports to it. He charges Zane, staring him down with the exact same look.
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He forms an energy wall that knocks JJ back, slightly stinging him. He then forms two clones at sends them at JJ in a pincer move while he vanishes and reappears behind him, knocking him to the clones.
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JJ reacts to the wall with a grunt, jumping back from it. He raises his sword, and slashes at the wall. The black aura of Despair literally cuts through aura of the wall, allowing him to step through. As Zane pushes JJ toward the clones, JJ drops into a forward roll. He cuts down the one on the right, and blocks the one on the left with his gauntlet. It cuts through slightly, damaging Rage and only drawing a small amount of blood. He then cleaves the clone apart, destroying it. He then spins on his heels, throwing his sword at Zane. Regardless of rather or not it makes contact, he will bring the sword back towards him. If it hits, it'll drag Zane into close range.
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He knocks the blade away with one of his sabers, and dashes around JJ forming energy beams in a circle. He jumps back and flicks his wrist, the beams passing though JJ and causing him to receive massive shock damage.
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Even though JJ seemed like a husk, he could still predict an attack. The beams circling JJ made it rather obvious what was to happen next. JJ jumped just before the beams suddenly closed, causing some to miss. The others that did hit merely dissipated upon colliding with Rage, but the force behind them did cause some internal damage, but it wouldn't cripple him. JJ then turns to Zane after landing, and utters one word in a tone and manner completely unlike him. "Quit." JJ then throws his sword directly in front of Zane, just out of range of the short beams coming out of his hands. He then appears directly in front of Zane, delivering a punch to the bottom of the sternum with speed to match Zane himself. He then follows up with a diagonal slash with Despair.
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He takes the slash, staggering back a bit before snap vanishing and hitting JJ in the back with his sabers, shocking JJ internally.
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Rage absorbs some of the shock, when but not all of it, causing damage along the outer layer of JJ's innards. "Graagh!" JJ whirls around, burying Despair in Zane's shoulder, then punching him in the nose.
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Edited by XxZANExX13: 12/8/2016 4:38:36 AMBlood drips from his shoulder as headbutt's JJ back, then leaps back himself, blood starting to stain his coat. "Huh, guess this is gonna hurt a bit..." He forms an energy ball in front of him, then snap vanishes behind JJ and hits him in the back with his sabers again, shocking him and sending him into the ball of energy.
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JJ gets sent into the energy ball, falling on top of it directly. "Nnngahh!" He stumbles after he manages to muster enough to hit the ball away with his sword, causing it to dissipate along the floor. Again, Rage dissipated the shock somewhat, but it still hurt JJ. Now, there was a hole visible in his shirt under Rage thanks to the shock. However, JJ turns to Zane, heaving to try and recover. Rage brightens somehow further, and Despair deepens to match. Then, he stands taller, and the look of pain lessens. He's still hurt, he just can't feel it as much. Then Rage begins to lengthen from JJ's back, and extends upwards. Then, it begins to spread outwards from there in three directions, and begins to take shape. This extension forms into a massive armored knight torso, and would cast a shadow everything were it not glowing so brightly. However, Rage did seem to dim somewhat. The Knight also carries a giant sword in one of its hands, making both JJ and Zane seem puny in comparison. The Knight then raises its blade, and attempts to slam it on top of Zane. Meanwhile, JJ stands in a defensive position, letting Rage get him to a better condition.
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Edited by XxZANExX13: 12/8/2016 5:32:30 AM"Well then, this just got interesting...." He jumps to the side, just barely dodging the blade as he jumps up, his claws reforming temporary as he dashes and starts to rip into the knight torso.
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JJ, still a factor using Despair, catches Zane before he can do any major damage with a quick toss of Despair, aimed directly at his side. Meanwhile, the Knight is trying to swat Zane away like a fly with his offhand.
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He moves his gauntlet to block Despair, and quickly air dashes to the side. He lands and switches back to his beam sabers, forming an energy ball and sending it at JJ.
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The Knight swings his sword against the ball, deflecting it and sending it flying against a wall to dissipate or blow up upon. [spoiler]If that's even possible. I know it is with the real Xemnas, but I don't know about you. If it isn't possible, just say that he took the blow with his hand, since he's completely made of energy.[/spoiler] This time, the Knight attempts to slice at Zane as JJ charges him, moving the Knight along with him.
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The ball explodes when it hits the wall, and Zane leaps at JJ with blinding speed, slicing his stomach with his twin sabers and continuing to move past him.
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The sabers cut through Rage, piercing the flesh of JJ stomach. However, even though he sustained injury, he didn't react. It seems like he doesn't feel it. Meanwhile, the Knight finishes his slice, and slams his sword into the ground right in front of Zane, causing him to run right into it. While that's happening, JJ calls Despair back to him and throws it at the top of Zane's spinal column.
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He quickly forms two clones, one to block despair and the other to shield him from the Knights attack, which gets crushed instantly since it's a giant freaking blade, but manages to protect Zane. Twilight tendrils come crashing up from the ground, restraining the knight and allowing Zane to send another ball of energy at JJ.
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JJ watches the ball, calling Despair back to him. It flies back, allowing him to bat the ball away just as the Knight had done. Then, JJ moves to cut the tendrils holding back the Knight's sword arm. They're destroyed upon being cut by Despair, allowing the Knight to free himself. And I'm assuming that Despair didn't destroy the clone that blocked it, JJ cuts down the clone as well. He then quickly turns to Zane, watching for his next move.
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What Zane does next is incredibly risky, tendrils crash up from the ground, this time binding both JJ and the knight. He then dashes forward and stops short, directly in front of JJ as he creates an energy ball and sets it off, the explosion sending both him and JJ back, but causing electricity to surge through JJ as a result.
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Rage slightly dissipates the shock and the blast, but most of it still hits JJ. He goes flying back, with the Knight moving backwards alongside him. Rage dims slightly as JJ struggles to his feet, his posture broken. Rage is battered and beaten, but slowly repairing itself. The Knight only has a few gashes and other breaks in its body from the explosion and Zane attacking it. Then, Rage and the Knight suddenly brighten, as JJ lets out a furious scream. His mind was being ravaged by the toll Rage took on him by this point, but it was out of control. The only way it'd stop now is if he calms down to the point where he can regain control, or if his body simply gives out. The Knight then begins slamming his sword down around Zane with a speed unlike before, but it was almost like it was throwing a tantrum. The massive sword began destroying the terrain around Zane, and threatened to crush him if he didn't attempt to move.
