originally posted in:The New Dojo
[spoiler]Very good writing, just one comment.
The dojo Guard would have picked this up and gone to investigate.
But other than that, very good [/spoiler]
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Edited by TwiggierTiger22: 1/6/2017 8:12:43 PM[spoiler]Did you not register the fact that it is on the other side of the planet?[/spoiler] [spoiler]But yea, thankssss[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]No I got that, but the guard likes to keep shit orderly across the planet [/spoiler] [spoiler]did you not register the fact that this is a planetary presence? [/spoiler] [spoiler]But yeah, no problem [/spoiler]