originally posted in:The New Dojo
[i][b]Ashes in the Wind.[/b][/i]
[i]As the old rusty door slowly slid open, its gears turning for the first time in years. The Saint closed his eyes as a chill slowly crept down his spine from the top of his head to his toes. What he'd find in the room of his old "acquaintance", as he called Noble now a days. No one could know, not yet.
The door made a grinding sound as it abruptly came to a halt. He stepped inside the frigid room and ran his hand across the left side of the wall until he found a switch. He slowly flipped the switch upward, the room quickly illuminated and was revealed before his very eyes. Along the right wall was Noble's own personal armory. All that was left was his two pristine clean Desert Eagles, his dirty and battered armor, and his dusty helmet. He took his robes and lightsabers with him to the grave.
Farther down on his left hand side was a closet, bookshelf, bed, and desk. Noble's personal laptop was left shut, yet plugged in. Scattered along the desk was handwritten notes, a Verizon Fios bill with a score and bets written down on the paper under it. Yet what stood out to The Saint was the formal letter enclosed with a red seal atop the laptop. As he picked up the letter his hands started to tremble, his legs felt like they were going to give out on him. Yet he just stood there, letter in hand as if someone froze him in ice. [/i]
[spoiler]Open, Also open to feedback. I know it wasn't much but every little bit helps.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Very good. Glad to see you're getting back into it.[/spoiler]
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Edited by Royal Blade: 1/7/2017 4:12:25 PM[b]Allister sniffed the air, since he had showed Saint the way here [/b] "Spooky."
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[spoiler]Sorry about not getting back to you before, I got banned and then got busy IRL[/spoiler] [i]The Saints head snapped back at the Captain, forgetting he was there. [/i] "Yeah, He's been gone for awhile now..." [i]The Saint fiddled the letter in his hand, he knew it was for him. Yet Al could tell he wasn't sure if he wanted to or not. [/i]
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[spoiler]It's alright [/spoiler] "You alright there? Seem kind of lost."
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"Yeah I'm fine, thanks." [i]Theres something he knows that he's not telling him. It probably has to to do with either the note, or standing in a dead mans room. [/i] [i]He sets down the note next to the laptop and opens the dresser, nothing in there besides everyday clothes.[/i] "Damn, That's annoying." [i]he rubs his helmet, clearly troubled.[/i]
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"Hey man, if there's anything missing we will help you search."
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"Yeah, he hid something here. It's the one thing he told me before he disappeared for good. This is the only place he could have hid it." [i]The Saint lifted up the mattress of the bed, revealing a compact with a paper under it. [/i] "It reads curiosity killed that cat, good thing they have nine lives."
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"Hehe, I've heard that a few times over."