{{
`${userDetail.user.displayName}${userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode ? `#${standardizeBungieGlobalCode(userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode)}` : ""}`}}
{{getUserClans()}}
originally posted in:The New Dojo
1/20/2017 11:59:34 PM
1
[b]Kross didn't stop for a second.
He crushed his fist, and Virion felt his whole body stiffen, his blood quite literally freezing [/b]
"Listen."
[b]He kneeled down by Virion's face [/b]
"One thing you should learn right now? You're not the strongest. And you probably won't be."
[b]He relaxed his fist and Virion could move again [/b]
"Good job fighting though."
[b]He stood[/b]
English
-
T-thanks, you too. *he attempts to heal his own wounds slowly* (so is Virion an ok character?)
-
(Very much okay, but if I may make a recommendation. I'd recommend that you start this RP with a character that doesn't have any powers. So you can practice your fighting, and slowly work up to powers. Felt like you didn't really know Virion's capabilities to well. One of the important things to having a good character is understanding your character, their limits, their pet peeves, etc)
