originally posted in:The New Dojo
"Then i live to see the day..."
[b]He laughed slightly [/b]
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[b]Dal returned to the stone after the buzz had died down, but Roy remained by the rock.[/b] "I'm guessing nobody who's worthy has come by?"
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"Actually, this prospect seems interesting...." [b]An older gentleman with blue robes was pulling the sword [/b]
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"Yeah, anyone could have a heart worthy enough." [b]He points at the elderly man.[/b] "Even him."
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[b]The man drew the sword from the sword and Royal gaped as he did so.[/b]
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"I'm sorry Roy." [b]Dal immediately jumped on the old man knocking his hood off and the sword from his hands.[/b]
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[spoiler]Yee, sorry you can't exactly do that since the old man is someone elses character. That would be considered what we call "Plot Jacking" Where someone interferes with the plot [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Oh, it appears I still have much to learn. Below will be a rewrite.[/spoiler] "You've got to be kidding me… that old geezer was worthy?"
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[spoiler]No one knows everything there is no know about RPing their first few times. You'll learn. [/spoiler] "That's King Falk of the Twilight.... And he's not that old..."
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"Young enough to duel me for that beautiful blade?" [b]Dal grew excited.[/b]
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"Perhaps? You must ask him yourself..." [spoiler]If you want to duel Falk then you should make a post where Dal calls for him. [/spoiler]
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Edited by Big Cash Moneys: 1/23/2017 11:50:48 PM[b]End.[/b] [spoiler]Okay I shall.[/spoiler] [spoiler]I would continue on her but god damn its getting harder and harder to find the responses.[/spoiler]