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originally posted in:The New Dojo
Edited by Big Cash Moneys:
1/23/2017 3:19:29 PM
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[b]The blades simply chink off his sterling armor. There is a low chuckle emitting from behind his helm. [/b]
"Monkey… that's a new one. I shall teach you of arrogance, no ignorance boy. I am much more than a monkey or any mortal man at that. I AM DALKROTH EVERSBANE HIGH LORD OF THE DESERTED VALOR, SLAYER OF DEMONS AND ANGELS ALIKE."
[b]He firmly plants his blade of light in the dirt and removes his helm revealing two glowing eyes one black and the other white.[/b]
"I shall instill in you the fear of god and the pain of satan."
[spoiler]This next part is mostly for my personal story, ignore it if you wish.[/spoiler]
[b]In an instant he is pressing on both your temples towering above you, in this moment he must choose if he will bend to his morales to regain his throne or give into his rage.[/b]
"Be cleansed my child."
[b]You fall with a thud to the floor glowing with a bright white. Dal would face many more personal tests that would see him make a choice, light/dark.[/b]
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Edited by Gustav: 1/23/2017 3:01:55 PM[i]The man laughs[/i] "Perhaps I misjudged you. Your blood shall fuel the instrumentality of man." [i]You realize that this is no ordinary man. This man is DIO, an ancient vampire who defeated the forces of light long ago! His stand, The World, rules over time itself![/i] "You have not yet noticed those veins of mine, digging deep into your so called godly flesh and draining your pathetic blood." [i]You feel a massive surge of energy from the man![/i] "THE WORLD OVER HEAVEN!" [i]The man gets up. He is changed. The scar on his neck is now fully healed, and with the blood of an equal foe, his stand has reached its full potential![/i] "Before, it was nine seconds... But now I can stop time for as long as I require! And these fists of mine shall rewrite your story from birth!" [i]You are paralyzed once more, and helplessly look on as your body is pummeled to a bloody pulp.[/i] "MUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDA! I shall give you one more chance. I will not move from this spot, lets call it a fair handicap shall we? Toki wo ugokidesu. The flow of time resumes." [i]You fall to the floor. Blood flows to your face in anger. How dare he mock a being such as yourself?! He is but a lowly vampire! You get up and take a stance, uneasy on your feet from the grave injuries of DIO's merciless fists. There shall be no more playing around, you think to yourself.[/i]
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Edited by Big Cash Moneys: 1/23/2017 3:09:43 PM[spoiler]The bottom was my original, it's kind of a cop-out but I'll formulate a better continuation in a moment.[/spoiler] [spoiler][b]Dal stands over the twitching man, still glowing with light.[/b] "I hope he enjoys his personal nirvana for the rest of eternity, he probably thinks he's beating me senseless right now."[/spoiler]
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Edited by Gustav: 1/23/2017 3:13:54 PM[spoiler]Fair enough but[/spoiler] [spoiler]I'm limiting myself by RP'ing as an existing character with existing weaknesses[/spoiler][spoiler]Don't go overboard with your OC[/spoiler][spoiler]then again World Over Heaven DIO is bullshit, but still[/spoiler]
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Edited by Big Cash Moneys: 1/23/2017 3:21:03 PM[spoiler]Yeah your guy seemed to be getting ridiculously strong so I kinda followed suit. But my guy has weaknesses, they just haven't been found yet ;).[/spoiler] [spoiler]Also the part where I just completely over power your guy was for my character, he's going through a process of reentering heaven, and I wanted to exemplify a situation in which he choses between dark and light. [/spoiler]
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Edited by Gustav: 1/23/2017 3:33:29 PM[spoiler]The only reason I introduced his World Over Heaven ability was because your guy seemed like one of those bullshit OC's, I was looking forward to making up a stand for him to even it out aswell :([/spoiler] [spoiler]Restart from the reply with the pic or make up a less cliche finisher, any one of those is fine[/spoiler] Edit: since you don't seem super knowledgable on the jojoverse I'll give you a link to the [url=http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand]wiki page for Stand abilities[/url]so you know what the hell is going on
