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originally posted in:The New Dojo
2/7/2017 3:09:44 AM
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[quote][b]Watcher waited in his perch, unsure of whether or not the Warlock knew where he was [/b][/quote]
The Warlock was just about to hit its Void-light bubble when it disappeared and immediately reappeared in its bubble at a trajectory towards the Dojo gates. The bubble simultaneously dissipated and with the continued momentum, the Warlock sped towards the gates, breaking the sound barrier. The sonic boom's explosion was multiplied by the tearing through of space-time, creating a shockwave following the warrior close behind.
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[b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b]
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[quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler]
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[quote][quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) The gates ARE open. But the void bomb still wouldn't affect them. I assumed it would hit them 2) Didn't the void bomb explode by the gates? 3) You'll have to figure it out [/spoiler]
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[quote][quote][quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) The gates ARE open. But the void bomb still wouldn't affect them. I assumed it would hit them 2) Didn't the void bomb explode by the gates? 3) You'll have to figure it out [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 & 2) if it was Void [u]light[/u] then yes, you are maybe right. However the bigger void orb I have ready is of Void [u]essence[/u], which has different properties, sorry if I didn't specify. I'm using it to deal with any obstruction in my way 3) it matters because it may affect the Warlock's trajectory[/spoiler]
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[quote][quote][quote][quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) The gates ARE open. But the void bomb still wouldn't affect them. I assumed it would hit them 2) Didn't the void bomb explode by the gates? 3) You'll have to figure it out [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 & 2) if it was Void [u]light[/u] then yes, you are maybe right. However the bigger void orb I have ready is of Void [u]essence[/u], which has different properties, sorry if I didn't specify. I'm using it to deal with any obstruction in my way 3) it matters because it may affect the Warlock's trajectory[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Oh. Where does isn't really anything in this courtyard besides the gates and the cherry blossom tree. 3) From the underbelly, so an angle towards the Warlock's stomach [/spoiler]
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[quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) The gates ARE open. But the void bomb still wouldn't affect them. I assumed it would hit them 2) Didn't the void bomb explode by the gates? 3) You'll have to figure it out [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 & 2) if it was Void [u]light[/u] then yes, you are maybe right. However the bigger void orb I have ready is of Void [u]essence[/u], which has different properties, sorry if I didn't specify. I'm using it to deal with any obstruction in my way 3) it matters because it may affect the Warlock's trajectory[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Oh. Where does isn't really anything in this courtyard besides the gates and the cherry blossom tree. 3) From the underbelly, so an angle towards the Warlock's stomach [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) isn't there shielding from the dojo defenses? 3) I thought it struck him in the back? [/spoiler]
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[quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) The gates ARE open. But the void bomb still wouldn't affect them. I assumed it would hit them 2) Didn't the void bomb explode by the gates? 3) You'll have to figure it out [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 & 2) if it was Void [u]light[/u] then yes, you are maybe right. However the bigger void orb I have ready is of Void [u]essence[/u], which has different properties, sorry if I didn't specify. I'm using it to deal with any obstruction in my way 3) it matters because it may affect the Warlock's trajectory[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Oh. Where does isn't really anything in this courtyard besides the gates and the cherry blossom tree. 3) From the underbelly, so an angle towards the Warlock's stomach [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) isn't there shielding from the dojo defenses? 3) I thought it struck him in the back? [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Not until there's an attack. The shield activates during an attack 3) Originally it did because I thought he landed already ][/spoiler]
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[quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) The gates ARE open. But the void bomb still wouldn't affect them. I assumed it would hit them 2) Didn't the void bomb explode by the gates? 3) You'll have to figure it out [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 & 2) if it was Void [u]light[/u] then yes, you are maybe right. However the bigger void orb I have ready is of Void [u]essence[/u], which has different properties, sorry if I didn't specify. I'm using it to deal with any obstruction in my way 3) it matters because it may affect the Warlock's trajectory[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Oh. Where does isn't really anything in this courtyard besides the gates and the cherry blossom tree. 3) From the underbelly, so an angle towards the Warlock's stomach [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) isn't there shielding from the dojo defenses? 3) I thought it struck him in the back? [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Not until there's an attack. The shield activates during an attack 3) Originally it did because I thought he landed already ][/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) and 2) so if my intent isn't to attack then it doesn't activate, even if I'm unauthorized?[/spoiler] 3) oh okay The Warlock's trajectory was thrown off, sending him tumbling into the air. To compensate, the Warlock greatly increased the effects of gravity upon himself to keep from flying off distantly into the mountain. He landed hard into the center of a Bar, shattering most of the bottles displayed and stored in the structure.
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Edited by Royal Blade: 2/7/2017 5:21:18 PM[quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) The gates ARE open. But the void bomb still wouldn't affect them. I assumed it would hit them 2) Didn't the void bomb explode by the gates? 3) You'll have to figure it out [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 & 2) if it was Void [u]light[/u] then yes, you are maybe right. However the bigger void orb I have ready is of Void [u]essence[/u], which has different properties, sorry if I didn't specify. I'm using it to deal with any obstruction in my way 3) it matters because it may affect the Warlock's trajectory[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Oh. Where does isn't really anything in this courtyard besides the gates and the cherry blossom tree. 3) From the underbelly, so an angle towards the Warlock's stomach [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) isn't there shielding from the dojo defenses? 3) I thought it struck him in the back? [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Not until there's an attack. The shield activates during an attack 3) Originally it did because I thought he landed already ][/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) and 2) so if my intent isn't to attack then it doesn't activate, even if I'm unauthorized?[/spoiler] 3) oh okay The Warlock's trajectory was thrown off, sending him tumbling into the air. To compensate, the Warlock greatly increased the effects of gravity upon himself to keep from flying off distantly into the mountain. He landed hard into the center of a Bar, shattering most of the bottles displayed and stored in the structure.[/quote] [spoiler]1, 2) The shields are shut off Right now. They're usually completely shut down during a test, to insure the canons aren't activate accidentally ][/spoiler] [b]Watcher exited the dojo and entered the village, searching for the crash [/b]
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[quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][quote][b]The gates, seemed terribly unaffected, remaining their closed state with naught more then a strange purple scratch upon it. Crack! A gunshot, striking The Warlock in the back and most likely not an avoidable one [/b][/quote] [spoiler]1) I thought the gates were still open since you ran through them? 2) I hadn't reached the gates yet. I still had a move anticipating this at the ready 3) from which direction did the bullet come from?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) The gates ARE open. But the void bomb still wouldn't affect them. I assumed it would hit them 2) Didn't the void bomb explode by the gates? 3) You'll have to figure it out [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 & 2) if it was Void [u]light[/u] then yes, you are maybe right. However the bigger void orb I have ready is of Void [u]essence[/u], which has different properties, sorry if I didn't specify. I'm using it to deal with any obstruction in my way 3) it matters because it may affect the Warlock's trajectory[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Oh. Where does isn't really anything in this courtyard besides the gates and the cherry blossom tree. 3) From the underbelly, so an angle towards the Warlock's stomach [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) isn't there shielding from the dojo defenses? 3) I thought it struck him in the back? [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1 and 2) Not until there's an attack. The shield activates during an attack 3) Originally it did because I thought he landed already ][/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]1) and 2) so if my intent isn't to attack then it doesn't activate, even if I'm unauthorized?[/spoiler] 3) oh okay The Warlock's trajectory was thrown off, sending him tumbling into the air. To compensate, the Warlock greatly increased the effects of gravity upon himself to keep from flying off distantly into the mountain. He landed hard into the center of a Bar, shattering most of the bottles displayed and stored in the structure.[/quote] [spoiler]1, 2) The shields are shut off Right now. They're usually completely shut down during a test, to insure the canons aren't activate accidentally ][/spoiler] [b]Watcher exited the dojo and entered the village, searching for the crash [/b][/quote] The Warlock got up and shook off the glass and wood.
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[b]Watcher skidded to a halt on the street, staring at the Warlock from afar as he raised his rifle and fired a round [/b]
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[quote][b]Watcher skidded to a halt on the street, staring at the Warlock from afar as he raised his rifle and fired a round [/b][/quote] The Warlock flinched from the round and ducked behind the counter.
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[b]The wound that was Incflicted felt as if it were quite literally boiling The Warlock's blood, and Watcher stepped forward [/b]
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[quote][b]The wound that was Incflicted felt as if it were quite literally boiling The Warlock's blood, and Watcher stepped forward [/b][/quote] [spoiler]the Warlock has no blood...[/spoiler] The Warlock aimed a force blast at the ground to get a seismic picture of his surroundings.
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[b]It was difficult, with all the things to read in the café but he seemed to be right behind something [/b]
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[quote][b]It was difficult, with all the things to read in the café but he seemed to be right behind something [/b][/quote] [spoiler]actually no, though it was a different technique, he effectively did what Toph does in Avatar (idk if you've seen it)[/spoiler] Sensing nothing threatening in the room, the Warlock located an exit in the room: a hallway. He quickly removed and then put back on his gauntlet, causing the alcohol around him to set fire. If Watcher bothered to look back towards the Dojo, he'd see the glow of a fire.
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[spoiler]Okay, I'm gonna have to ask you to redo your character following this character sheet [/spoiler] Name- Alias- Age- Gender- Background [spoiler] [/spoiler] Abilities [spoiler] [/spoiler] Equipment [spoiler] [/spoiler] Weaknesses [spoiler] [/spoiler] Quirks/personality [spoiler] [/spoiler]
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Edited by MuKoKu: 2/9/2017 5:16:58 PMI'll actually do a better more in depth one than that. I'll edit his bio in the bio page. Meanwhile I'd highly recommend you don't write for the other person's character. It's very unsportsmanlike.
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See I didn't think his seismic vision would be that good. The only reason I did it really
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[quote]See I didn't think his seismic vision would be that good. The only reason I did it really[/quote] No. This is why you don't write on behalf of the other character. Otherwise I might as well say that Watcher accidentally stepped on a knife tipped with the poison of a box jellyfish that an amateur assassin inconveniently dropped while on mission. You should only write in regards to [u]your[/u] character's actions. That way it gives your opponent a chance to respond and react. Yes it would make it up to your opponent to decide if he got hit or not, but then your opponent would also have to exercise honesty when it comes to this medium of RP and stay true to the character he/she is [u]role playing[/u] as. If your opponent can't be true to the limitations of the character, then it's just pointless. You did that a few times and I let it slide. But depending on if I got in, i was going to push for some reforms to make the quality of fighting to be more consistent and honest. It is partly my fault too since I deliberately wrote a sort of vague bio so that 1) I can explore this character and figure out what's good and bad and 2) I get anxiety of publicizing my creativity
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There's a huge difference between me slightly assuming the power, and Watcher stepping on a life ending knife don't you think?
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[quote]There's a huge difference between me slightly assuming the power, and Watcher stepping on a life ending knife don't you think?[/quote] I was exaggerating to point out the slippery slope that writing assumptions upon other characters' abilities can be. I understand that you're upset, but I also wrote a vague leaning bio to test the waters of maturity and humility here before I get more involved.
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Well to be fair, the vagueness doesn't really elaborate on anything. So of course people would be upset for sudden seismic readings
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[quote]Well to be fair, the vagueness doesn't really elaborate on anything. So of course people would be upset for sudden seismic readings[/quote] It's more of an improvisation of two of his abilities.
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Hm. Still. I'd recommend a more in depth Bio
