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originally posted in:The New Dojo
2/8/2017 2:12:16 AM
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[b]The wound that was Incflicted felt as if it were quite literally boiling The Warlock's blood, and Watcher stepped forward [/b]
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[quote][b]The wound that was Incflicted felt as if it were quite literally boiling The Warlock's blood, and Watcher stepped forward [/b][/quote] [spoiler]the Warlock has no blood...[/spoiler] The Warlock aimed a force blast at the ground to get a seismic picture of his surroundings.
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[b]It was difficult, with all the things to read in the café but he seemed to be right behind something [/b]
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[quote][b]It was difficult, with all the things to read in the café but he seemed to be right behind something [/b][/quote] [spoiler]actually no, though it was a different technique, he effectively did what Toph does in Avatar (idk if you've seen it)[/spoiler] Sensing nothing threatening in the room, the Warlock located an exit in the room: a hallway. He quickly removed and then put back on his gauntlet, causing the alcohol around him to set fire. If Watcher bothered to look back towards the Dojo, he'd see the glow of a fire.
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[spoiler]Okay, I'm gonna have to ask you to redo your character following this character sheet [/spoiler] Name- Alias- Age- Gender- Background [spoiler] [/spoiler] Abilities [spoiler] [/spoiler] Equipment [spoiler] [/spoiler] Weaknesses [spoiler] [/spoiler] Quirks/personality [spoiler] [/spoiler]
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Edited by MuKoKu: 2/9/2017 5:16:58 PMI'll actually do a better more in depth one than that. I'll edit his bio in the bio page. Meanwhile I'd highly recommend you don't write for the other person's character. It's very unsportsmanlike.
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See I didn't think his seismic vision would be that good. The only reason I did it really
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[quote]See I didn't think his seismic vision would be that good. The only reason I did it really[/quote] No. This is why you don't write on behalf of the other character. Otherwise I might as well say that Watcher accidentally stepped on a knife tipped with the poison of a box jellyfish that an amateur assassin inconveniently dropped while on mission. You should only write in regards to [u]your[/u] character's actions. That way it gives your opponent a chance to respond and react. Yes it would make it up to your opponent to decide if he got hit or not, but then your opponent would also have to exercise honesty when it comes to this medium of RP and stay true to the character he/she is [u]role playing[/u] as. If your opponent can't be true to the limitations of the character, then it's just pointless. You did that a few times and I let it slide. But depending on if I got in, i was going to push for some reforms to make the quality of fighting to be more consistent and honest. It is partly my fault too since I deliberately wrote a sort of vague bio so that 1) I can explore this character and figure out what's good and bad and 2) I get anxiety of publicizing my creativity
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There's a huge difference between me slightly assuming the power, and Watcher stepping on a life ending knife don't you think?
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[quote]There's a huge difference between me slightly assuming the power, and Watcher stepping on a life ending knife don't you think?[/quote] I was exaggerating to point out the slippery slope that writing assumptions upon other characters' abilities can be. I understand that you're upset, but I also wrote a vague leaning bio to test the waters of maturity and humility here before I get more involved.
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Well to be fair, the vagueness doesn't really elaborate on anything. So of course people would be upset for sudden seismic readings
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[quote]Well to be fair, the vagueness doesn't really elaborate on anything. So of course people would be upset for sudden seismic readings[/quote] It's more of an improvisation of two of his abilities.
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Hm. Still. I'd recommend a more in depth Bio
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[quote]Hm. Still. I'd recommend a more in depth Bio[/quote] I know. I'll work on that before we continue
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[spoiler]What... How does he not have blood [/spoiler]
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[quote][spoiler]What... How does he not have blood [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]He lost it to become what he is. Kind of, but not exactly like Alphonse Elric from FMA[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Interesting.... Then forget that last part about the blood boiling [/spoiler]
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[quote][spoiler]Interesting.... Then forget that last part about the blood boiling [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]ok. Does Watcher still know this secret? I would have been more vague if so. Just wanted to be open about it since this is testing.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]No he doesn't. What we say inside spoilers Is strictly between us, anything that happens outside spoilers is cannon [/spoiler]
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[quote][spoiler]No he doesn't. What we say inside spoilers Is strictly between us, anything that happens outside spoilers is cannon [/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]Okay, cool 👍[/spoiler]
