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11/16/2016 12:23:09 AM
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So I wrote a song.

Let's get right into it shall we? My girlfriend and I have been dating nearly two years now, and for the anniversary, she's all but begged me to write a song for her. So, hesitantly I agreed. Well, three weeks in and I'm just finishing up, and I was hoping some of you lovelies here could tell me if the song itself is okay? While I'm nerveous about doing this, I'm far more nerveous about looking stupid in front of the girl I love. I am well aware I can't sing, and I'm fairly new to the ukulele, but any feedback whatsoever would be very much appreciated. Much love to all of you who veiw this post. :) -------------------- Lyrics: I always love the way she looks All the way, every step she took The way she stole my heart away from me. I'll always be a lost boy never set free From dreams, of you and me. Well Listen now, Such a beautiful sound Well Look around Just look around . I could see it now That little white house Oh how you adored it I'll work ever day through sun and rain Till I can afford it. Cause I want to bring you the mountains The sky and the sea. I'd give you my all, If you'd just lie  next to me. Well Listen now, Such a beautiful sound Well Look around Just look around . I could see it now That little white house Oh how you adored it I'll work ever day through sun and rain Till I can afford it. I could see it now That little white house Oh how you adored it I'll work ever day through sun and rain Till I can afford it. I promise I'll find a way to afford it. ----------------------- Once again, any feedback, good, or horrid would be so unbelievably appreciated. <3

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  • Good stuff. But I have a message from TJ Laser. "Hickory dickory dock. This b**ch was sucking my c**k. The clock struck 2. I'll spilt my goo, and dropped her off at the end of the block." Hmm. Something like that.

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