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Edited by Lost Sols:
11/8/2017 9:24:16 PM
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Fragments of Time (#MoTW Submission)
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Community/Detail?itemId=237943675]Link to video on creations page[/url]
Life is a collection of memories. People we meet. Places we visit. Things we experience both together with friends and on our own.
This is a Guardian's story told through that lens of time of moments past, things remembered, fragments of time held onto and carried within.
Hope you like it and if you do, a bump on the creations page is appreciated. Thank you :)
[spoiler]Song written, performed and recorded by Lost Sols
Video by Lost Sols and RedWingGirl1999[/spoiler]
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Edited by JoeyPastrami: 11/9/2017 2:51:45 PMIt was OK. The vocals? not great by any sense. The lyrics? pretty standard. The video? again pretty standard. I'm not hating on you, but your Youtube video was good, just good, not better, not worse. I am a little confused why so many people are praising this like it is the best thing they've ever seen. Honestly, improve the vocals and it would be better than good. More emotional or moving lyrics with maybe a little more thought would make it pretty great. The editing was a little sub par. Overall, OK video, I don't think it deserves movie of the week. But then again, the MoTW since D2 haven't been too outstanding so maybe you have a chance.
