It's nice! When I went through my goth phase I used to do something similar! Now im older, I keep make up basic.. Boring I know lol I wouldn't make your face that pale tho.. Or Atleast blend it down to your neck to take the obvious colour difference out. It's like when you see girls with partially orange faces and bright white necks 😂 I think bolder lashes (or even fake ones) would look good. Black and red always look nice and as your eyes are so bright, it would emphasise them even more but if you go the whole hog, definitely a darker lippy!