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originally posted in:The New Dojo
1/5/2018 3:12:40 AM
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[spoiler]Ok may dude love your style but Periods (like this -> . ). Exist. Please use them, it hurts me physically to read stuff without them. Also, characters speaking, use Quotation marks, and say what they say exactly. I also like to use italics for talking, looks good. Anyways, onto the story!"[/spoiler]
[b]The lobby was furnished with some couches and various artifacts on the walls, mostly drawings and diagrams in picture frames. When you walk in, there's nobody there, but with a flash of smoke and light, suddenly a man stands before you.
He stands at about 5' 10, and is wearing a long white jacket, almost a robe, and carries a cane made of vertebrae and a raven skull. He is a bit portly, but certainly not fat.
He bows deeply and extravagantly, before straightening.[/b]
[i]"Welcome, dear guest, to the Necrotel, home of all Necromatic knowledge. How may I assist you today?"[/i]
English
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Edited by ImaDrizzit: 1/5/2018 3:24:33 AM“Well for starters I would like to know if you have any rooms I could rent”?
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[i]"Oh most certainly. We always have room for more guest in the Necrotel. Come with me and we'll get you signed in for your stay."[/i] [b]He led you to a large desk in the middle of the lobby, and quickly got you signed in on the computer.[/b] [i]"Would you like to participate in our guided tour of the facility? It's only five dollars a ticket."[/i]
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“Yes I would like to have a tour”. [b]Pulls our 7 gold pieces.[/b]
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[i]"Wooah there. I know we're Swiss but you needn't pay in gold. Standard bills will do my friend."[/i]
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“I’m sorry I don’t have any bills on me will the gold coins do”? [b] Continues to put the coins on the desk.[/b]
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[i]"I suppose..."[/i] [b]He takes the coins and places them in the register.[/b] [i]"Now then, would you like to be shown to your room, or will you be fine on your own?[/i]
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“Can I have a tour of the place first ending with my room”?
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[i]"So sorry, but the guided tour is in one hour from now. Here's your ticket." [/i] [b]He handed over a ticket, black with bright red lettering.[/b] [i]"We will begin here in the lobby for the tour. Anyways here is your room key."[/i] [b]He said, handing over a small crystal ball with a small green gem at the center.[/b] [i]"Would you like to be shown to your room?"[/i]
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“I’ll wait in the lobby until the tour starts”.
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[i]"Ok then. Just don't touch any of the artifacts, they could steal your soul."[/i] [b]He bowed and walked off, leaving you alone in the lobby.[/b]
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[b]I will sit down and wait for a hour.[/b]
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[b]During the hour several people come in, the flash of light and smoke happens again, and a person in a white robe greets them like they greeted you. Otherwise, once the hour is up, an announcement over the intercom stated that the tour would be beginning shortly, and you see the man who greeted you walk into the lobby.[/b]
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[b] I will get up and ask him “will the tour begin now I am very eager to see this marvelous hotel”.[/b]
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[spoiler]Periods buddy.[/spoiler] [i]"The tour'll start in a second buddy, just hold in your excitement for a moment please."[/i]
