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Edited by Gahlran Cosplay: 2/17/2019 7:29:26 PM
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Making guns

"You're going to break that you know" A standard white shelled ghost said "No i won't, i understand it's internals now" "You said that the last time Aron" The ghost replied. Aron, an awoken titan with short dark hair, green eyes and an oval face, looked gave his ghost an annoyed glare before turning back to the "weapon" he had laid about on the table "You know Aron, you could just talk to Banshee about your project. I'm sure Banshee would get it done in no time." "I know i could Obsidian" He turned to face his ghost "But i [i]want[/i] to make this on my own, with [i]my[/i] parts and [i]my[/i] hands" He loved Obsidian like a brother, but sometimes he would act like Aron couldn't do anything outside of combat. "Well he could at least give you tips on...[i]that[/i]" Obsidian bobbed it's shell towards the weapon, a Shingen-E receiver with a Khvostov 7G-0X stock, a scope taken from a broken Mida Multi Tool, a drum mag from an experimental Sahara rifle and some sort of long barrel (it looked like a scout rifle barrel, but for a smaller caliber) with an all black scheme. Obsidian looked back to Aron "I think it looks good" Aron said "It looks like two bastard children had a bastard child, Aron" Obsidian replied "too bad, i'm keeping it". "So, you want to register this.....weapons....blueprint into the database?" Commander Zavala had always been "the guy" to get anything done, whether it be authorizing strikes, raiding the highest threat level enemies, or simply running patrols. But now, he had to deal with a titan with an odd looking (but somewhat impressive) rifle..thing. "I'm sorry, but we need proof that it is reliable enough for widespread use. Until you get the proper papers saying it is, we cannot accept it's bluepr-" "WHAT IS GOING ON HERE?" Lord shaxx had noticed the rifle as Aron passed by, and instantly fell in love with it's design. "Oh, Lord Shaxx, i'm just telling this guardian that he needs proper testing for his weapon before he ca- " TESTING? NONSENSE! I CAN TELL THIS WILL BE A GREAT WEAPON, LOOK AT IT ZAVALA, IT'S BIG! IT'S INTIMIDATING! IT! IS! GREAT!" "Lord shaxx, i don't think you unders-" "ZAVALA! IF THIS WEAPON DOES FAIL THEN I WILL PERSONALLY TAKE RESPONSIBILITY FOR IT! BUT LET THIS FIREARM HAVE IT'S GLORIOUS CHANCE" "........Okay, but know that if this weapon fails or harms any guardians, then i will hold BOTH of you accountable for it, understand?" "Yes" "THATS WHAT I JUST SAID!" "Good, now guardian, what is it's name? Zavala pointed towards the weapon. "The decimator". So, this was an attempt at something making a semi serious fanfiction article. What do you guys think? any tips? thanks.
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  • Nicely done! My only feedback is that you should separate the story into paragraphs and start new paragraphs whenever someone new starts speaking. When you have everything bunched together in one paragraph, it makes it harder for readers to enjoy. May I add this to my [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/245771343/0/0]Archive[/url]?

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