*looks at your art, then looks at my art of weird succulents* In comparison, yours is great.

Oh, you drew the edgy one who couldn’t decide one he wanted so he went with half and half. But, salt aside, very good work!

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Head [spoiler]There's something that's making his face look very tall and rectangular. I think for the eyes, they have to be a tad lower, cause I see that nose bridge/eyebrow shadow curving left. Maybe round out the hair a bit, cause it's lookin a bit flat. For the face... yeah faces suck to draw sometimes. So try smoothing the transition from curving left to going up, cause it looks like the cheeks are, cheekboney ... m a n l y, like a Jojo character. TD is a boyo, so smoothen that out. The neck should also curve out a bit at the top, but right now that's fine.[/spoiler] Neck [spoiler]There's already talk about the shoulders, but quick thing, necks aren't that long, but I think I found the picture you used, so I see what you're tryna do. You're curving down too much, shoulders are like a straight line then a curve at the edge (idk that's what I do at first then I just, make em shouldery) also, I think you may have to raise them to make it more natural in this picture even if the other picture works out. Nice going on the collar tho. Just gotta make sure your spacing is equal on both sides.[/spoiler] Shading [spoiler]Shading, I think there was also one in this, but try refraining from shading a whole neck, unless the light source is above the characters head. Ignoring the direction on the jacket, it seems the light source is on the top right of the paper. Now, the cheek can only cover so much, so if you have to, draw a line from the cheek bone, and keep going in the direction of the light until you cleared the neck, or just keep going. Use that line for your shading guiding, cause now, everything on the neck behind the head, can be shaded up to that line. Until you take into account human anatomy... collarbones, and those bumps in the neck. Eventually you gotta learn how to shade bumps or around them and stuff, but that's meh.[/spoiler] TL;DR: I suggest reading it all. [spoiler]Also, try looking up some anatomy pictures and drawing them, or trace them if you want. Learn how details are made by copying those details.[/spoiler]

That looks really nice!

Looks pretty good for the most part! The shoulders look a little off, though. I think they just need to be broadened a bit. The shadows on his face also don’t match up with the shadows on his jacket; his face & neck looks like the light is coming from the right, but the jacket looks like it’s coming from the left. Other than that, though, looks good! Nice job!

Ohhhh How did you get the colors to look so nice