[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Reverance 7 > I like the way you write your stories, Im waiting for part 6. PS: I [i]Loved[/i] the way you made the mercy kill for the old man, it was cool, exiting and sad all-in-one paragraph. Keep it up, Its interesting how people Bend the creed of the Elite's Honor and the Real tuth that lies behind The Path, You've wonn another literature fan, * I'll think I need to save this thread* <<[/quote] Thanks for the feedback. You should check out Halo 3: Insurrection and Memoirs of an ODST if you liked this, you can see them to the right hand of the Gallery forum index. And by the way, Sorran didn't kill the old man in Part 11, he killed his son, knocked the death wishing old man unconscious, and hid him in a nearby basement. Maybe I didn't make that clear enough. But once again, thanks.