Why did you feel the need to tell him your petty problems with his wonderful story. Maybe you could not lurk and gtfa. If you have a problem with his story, there is an extremly simple salution: Spend your time else where. Unfortunatly, people as rude as you post things like this when they dont need to be involved. Unless of course you are super defencive of the halo universe canon and are a nerd who wants to look cool in front of the viewers of this story. On a happer note, great strory wolverfrog. Please dont stop. By the way, shouldn't you tie things up with sorran and savhra and make them a couple again? ;) I think that you shouldn't let people put you down for your writing and i also think that you shouldnt put yourself down in the same way. So I think i speak for kost of us when i say that even he beginning was awesome and showed great potential. Every thing is very well written with the exeptions of a minor few parts that i wouldn't care to go into detail over. Anyway that person who bad mouthed you can go to hell right? Great work!! :D One last thing I think you have great potential as a writer and should go down that career path. Unless, of course you were planning on doing something else. Anyway dont let people put you down and don't put yourself down either. That isn't going to get you anywhere in life. I think i speak for most of us when i say that even the beginning [Edited on 08.09.2011 11:32 PM PDT]