[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ZeonCobra Nice job on the story, but aren't you going to update it on Fanfiction.net?[/quote] I will when book two is finished. I'll certainly have my work cut out, there's a lot of update. Sorry that this next chapter it taking a while to write; rest assured I am writing it; I was considering releasing it as it was but decided it wasn't apt to end the chapter there and so have extended it. It's the longest chapter to date (I seem to be saying that with every chapter recently) and it's still got a little bit to go before completion; there are a lot of big moments in it. Thanks for your patience. [Edited on 08.12.2011 4:19 PM PDT]