Whoa, you killed a Spartan, thats one of the most rarest sights in a Halo fanfic, most people wank the hell out of them by making them unstoppable Gods of war, even the SPARTAN-IIIs are made uber powerful despite them being able to be killed by only a few shots. I also like that you made the Forerunners are humans, from what I've seen in the games and novels like Halo: Contact Harvest, Halo: The Flood and Halo: Ghost of Onyx that would make more sense than humans being the Forerunners inheritors. That would also make some pretty interesting reactions. I would love to see how other covenant react when they realize that they are destroying the very race they worship.