[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Ringtail11 That last chapter was great Wolvers. However "Death swung his scythe, and the funeral bells rang." sounds a bit weak for the ending of the chapter. How could a funeral bell ring, a funeral implies that it was a planned event. Perhaps something like: The air of life was seared, and the cold death knell tolled. or Death r@ped his sacred crop, leaving the rest to the brewing storm. [/quote] Whilst what Wolvers wrote was no literary [i]magnum opus[/i], what you just suggested in its place sounds [i]abysmal[/i]... [Edited on 10.25.2011 1:15 PM PDT]