I've read three years' worth of work in just over three days! Its clear to see your writing has matured substantially, but even at its least sophisticated point it was still captivating. Impressive works. I love the intricacy of the plot; I can see it all weave together before me. I am also glad for the fact that you would so easily kill off well-established characters and avoid their pathetic retention to satisfy the emotional attachment readers have with them. Its stirring! With regards to SEALSniper's comment: by no means stop writing fan-fictions! However, I do agree that you should, at some point, make the leap into something purely original. You're clever and eloquent, and clearly creative. Start a blog or something and post the link in the Flood, you've got a great fanbase here, I'm sure we'd all follow you over. There's plenty more I could say, but I'll leave it for now. Good luck with your exams, I finished my GCSEs today, so I'll be avidly waiting for the next part!