originally posted in:The Black Garden
just throwing this out here guys. Some of us have been working with each other already. Some of us have not. I think it would be a good idea to introduce out characters to each other, get acquainted with them.
Lt. Aleroth Aloki. Leader of Dragon squad. Human Titan. Being the son of a beloved leader who has died, Aleroth seeks to do what he can to protect the people he cares about, first and foremost. Aside from that, he seeks to see that anyone around him lives to see another day. He will fight officers who willingly toss their men into hopeless situations and will fight for the men and women who happen to be under his command. Slowly but surely, he will rise through the ranks so he can do just that, keeping as many fellow Guardians he can to return home to their families.
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Edited by Chaotic Dream: 7/24/2013 2:26:49 AMXyeminath Demarious Awoken Male 20 No official rank Hunter Background: Growing up on the outskirts of the last city Xye learned survival of the fittest at a young age. His family was murdered during a fallen raid leaving only him the sole survivor. This causes him to shy away from social contact in most situations. He also blames himself for the loss of his family and because of this refuses to take a rank in the guardians preferring to take contracts as a free lancer and uses a lone wolf approach to his missions unless the contract states otherwise. He is motivated by treasure and the chance to prove his ability to be on the top of the food chain. His only companion being a ghost named Vin (for now). However, when he sees those in danger he is the first to jump to help them as a way to redeem himself for his families death, though he will shy away from the credit should it be made a public ordeal.
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I'm not part of the Black Garden, but I'd love to develop a character here. I was going to follow Hatter's lead with a combat eval, but I wasn't able to accurately depict my character. so here he is: Benoit (last name tbd) Awoken male not yet ranked Warlock Backstory: Ben was an Awoken street urchin in the last city growing up. this is where he learned to be a survivor. this is also where he developed his avariciousness and his tendency to take care of himself before anyone else. lacking the ability to talk his way out of situations, he developed a reputation as a ghost, able to sneak anywhere and steal anything. after hearing the stories about the treasure Guardians would find on missions and wanting to become a legend that would be remembered not only in the streets but also in the history books, he joined the Guardians and developed his arcane powers. he is fiercely loyal to his fire-team, considering them barley more important than treasure and glory (everyone else can go f themselves for all he cares). despite having fought countless times, he never displays ptsd or other "normal" reactions to his lifestyle. many, including Ben, believe this to be a result of acute insanity. while he is quick to show fear, that fear quickly turns to anger, which he has a problem controlling. the only thing that he is crippling scarred of are the Hive. He is proficient in his use of side-arms, good in his use of rifles and close quarters weapons, and terrible in his use of snipers and ordinance.
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Hmm wow ive been apart of this group for awhile and never did this. Lilyanna Ara Female Awoken Warlock Leader of the Causin Chaos Regiment Was originally under the leadership of the Aloki family. Aleroth Aloki's parents were sent to Titan one of Saturns moons. Lilyanna Ara was under the direct command of Sir Aloki and is the only survivor of the incident (As far as we know). Her flashbacks to the event cripple her every now and then. Thanks to Aleroth Aloki she still lives.
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Sorry my post was so lengthy, I tried to keep it short as I could but couldn't pull it off
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I've decided to introduce may character in an assessment report from one of his superiors, I've never tried this before so its going to be a little odd for me. As always criticism is always appreciated as well as compliments. Name: "Hatter" Class: Warlock Race: Exo Quite the unusual character this... "Hatter"... The first of his traits that I noticed was his silence, he seems to have poor communication skills. Either he has non or if he just neglects them, it's beyond me. On the contrary to what I originally assumed, he was very obedient during the simulation, followed every order. He seemed to favor the shotgun, maybe a little too much for his own good. Even when the contacts were obviously out of range he seemed to refuse the use of his rifle. Something else I was worried about during the combat sim was what seemed to be a twitch or a tick. After the official assessment I sat down to talk with the engineers that had made the repairs on Hatter. Naturally my first question referred to his communication skills, they had told me that he was built during the golden age but was forced into a total shutdown due to the lack of maintenance. The engineers told me how they had to replace almost every part with a near exact replica. When they began work on the brain they were able to fix most of the problems but were unable to correct his psychological difficulties which would explain the twitch and the silence. Later that day I called the Exo into my office for an interview, my first question was about his first memory. His behavior was odd at first, he wasn't nervous, he wasn't excited, he seemed distant as if he were locked in his own thoughts. When his attention was drawn back to my question he only answered with one word, "waking" After a few moments of thinking he continued, "It was dark, I searched for something that could work as a light source but when I found a switch it wouldn't budge." He took a couple more moments to think, "I struggled with the lever for a little longer before someone else came to help." He snickered "When we finally moved the damn thing the lights came on one by one and it was then that we first realized we weren't human." "You didn't know?" "No." That last word echoed in my mind, he said it with such a powerful tone, sadness without sorrow. We sat there a while without any words exchanged. He didn't like the quiet, I saw it in his face. So he broke through the powerful silence, "I may not be human on the outside, but I can feel... I can think... I know I'm human, somewhere." He returned to my question, "After we left the warehouse the first thing I saw was a giant sphere, hovering over the surface of the earth. I couldn't help but feel responsible for it, I felt I needed to protect it." "So that's why you came here?" "Yes, I think it played a part in reviving me and my friend. I will protect the sphere and the city beneath it with my life." The interview was basically over at that point, all I needed was his loyalty, to be sure he was a soldier. So I dismissed him and immediately began filling out the papers, and as I write this assessment I have no doubt in my mind that that boy will make a fine guardian. Again complements and criticism are appreciated
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Pvt. Kohl Lazareth Human Hunter Current Squad: n/a Kohl joined the Guardians because he felt he had to prove something, also because he felt he needed to protect his beloved mother and younger brother whom have always led him on the right path. Sadly his father died when he was of an age to young to remember for himself, but from what he's been told he died of an honorable death, he stayed back during a mission to hold the only exit for his fellow squad mates.
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Wow! So many great stories!!!!:) yours too colonel!!!!
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Traxis Hunter Female Race TBD Traxis is a rogue and a survivor. She defends the city but is most at home in the Wilds, going it solo or with one or two Guardians at her side. She is lethal at range with her favorite sniper rifle, named No Quarter, and deadly up close with her trusty six-shooter hand cannon, name Frost.
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Edited by Sentinel: 6/18/2013 4:14:41 PMName:The silent One Race:exo Class:Titan Planet of Origen:mars Faction:dead orbit. Origen story A long time ago, during mars golden age, there was much activity and happiness, however the silent one never showed emotions, never showed any type of happiness,remorse, anything. Created as a defective exo, he was banished for being incomplete, since a voice box was never installed, making him mute for life. He only had one function that he knew what to do:protect. When the cabal invaded, and destroyed much of the city of mars,they killed the silent one, and threw his dead corpse in an escape pod towards earth. The pod crashed in the ruins of Chicago, where a human fire team found his corpse and rescued him, and brought the corpse to the last city to be rebuilt. Now he is in all guardians debt. And helps all who are in need. He vows to one day take his revenge on the cabal, and retrieve a lost item of his: the hand cannon known as thorn.
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Well the story I have for you guys will be a little bit different from the rest because it is a comedy/psychological thriller. Name: Spanky Ashkins Race: Awoken Class: Warlock Planet of Origen: Uranus Origen Story In the planet Uranus, they only know one movie from human culture... Twilight. Sadly in Uranus, that movie is praised as a classic. One young lad, Spanky Ashkins, wants to be a mix of Edward and Jacob so that he can get the ladies, and it should be easy for him because of his ghostly elf appearance. But suddenly,as his planet was nearly demolished by the Cabal, some mysterious force brings him to the last city on Earth... well almost, he is just outside the walls of it. Oddly, he is still happy because he realizes the force gave him magical powers so that he is closer to his mentors. He makes a vow to not use any guns and to not wear anything above his waist since he is magical. Little does the young awoken know, the Traveler has an adventure that bends the mind and time planned ahead for him.
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Don't know how this works so here goes: Jason Steven "Rojo" Wayne Human Hunter (Don't know how ranking is) His father was a Guardian squad leader. On a routine patrol his entire squad was slaughtered and he fell into a state of depression eventually killing himself and leaving young Jason an orphan as his mother died during childbirth. He had to steal to survive. One day he tried to steal from the wrong person (a high ranking Guardian) and was thrown into the academy. A few years later he was sent out on a survival test with his partner; he felt like he was baby sitting him all the time. After 2 days of training he had different views about how to go about a situation and it turned into an argument then a fight, his partner winning. Jason left to continue to the rendezvous point. His partner on the other hand was attacked by 3 Fallen who were only equipped with swords. Jason returned to save his partner by pushing him out of the way of an incoming attack only to lose his left eye. (Jason brushed it off as only a flesh wound). His partner then killed the confused Fallen with a swift stab to the heart. After bandaging his eye Jason insisted on killing the rest. They did so with extreme team work and prejudice. Jason's loss of vision created a large blind spot, large enough that he couldn't see a piece of metal dislodge from the ruins above. His partner grabbed Jason and threw him out of the way only to be crushed to death by it. Jason is afraid to lose comrades and will even die to protect them but because of this he doesn't get to attached to things or people as he knows only the sorrow it will bring; he has a blind spot which is fatal although he has learnt how to make it smaller; his left eye can be used but after 20mins causes severe migraines and even begins to bleed profusely; he has recurring nightmares of his father and partners death. He is adept in CQC (he is renowned for breaking a Fallen Captains sword with only his finned (bladed) gauntlets and then proceeding to kill it with his bare hands) he is extremely agile being able to keep up with a Fallen Captain in hand to sword combat. He is extremely smart but too lazy to show it; he's laid-back and considers everything troublesome; sarcastic and an overall tease but he is still distant.
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Edited by Combat Boots: 5/29/2013 1:18:07 AMAll of my characters info can be found in my short back ground story. to make a seven chapter story short though... Name: Daleros Alias: N/A (find out by reading his story) Gender: Male Class: Hunter Faction: Undecided Daleros grew up as the son of a middle class merchant. His brothers all died fighting for the last city except the first who got involved in bad business, and the last who followed his fathers footsteps. All his life he has read about heroes coming from the houses of great families or fighting their ways out of the slums of poverty. His goal in life is to prove that the people of the most over looked society can leave as much of an immortal mark on the world as others.
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Name: Corsev Attaron Alias: N/A Gender: Male Race: Human Class: Warlock Faction: Seven Seraphs Long interested in the Travelers' mysterious powers, Corsev Attaron joined the Requiem Academy about 777 AGA (After Golden Age), and has since been acquainted with the abilities the Traveler has granted us. On the surface, there's nothing really remarkable about him. But, beneath the fancy Combat Robes and such lies a brave man who shows a deep sense of nobility and justice. He would do anything to protect his allies, whatever the cost. He still is learning how to truly master his powers, but with time... He could be one of greatest Guardians out there.
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Name: Perdidit Viator Alias: Viit Race: Awoken Classification: Warlock Perditit, Perditit, inside the Tower all day Scribbling on Notepads and Whiteboards all hand writ illegibly Perditit, Perditit, stress on his mind gone astray No sleep for him, with his guild going down inevitably Viit, Viit, the adventurer of legends Stuck in the Citadel with friends frightened Viit, Viit, he watched his friends lives come to ends The lone escapee his mind deafened
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Edited by Rubio Audiotre: 5/18/2013 3:29:16 AMName: Ekrem Row Alias: Silver one Race: Awoken Classification: Warlock ( strategist) "Ekrem it's not your fault for what happened". I keep hearing the same thing from the recruits it's like it's on repeat. None of this should have happened , i should have been prepared for our exploration into the Black marsh lands of old Jersey. I new these lands belonged to the Hive, i knew they had control. I thought me, Tim, Amy, Rorick and the recuits could handle it......BLURA, *Cough*. " Ekrem are you okay" yes i'm fine Rorick. It looks like the injury i sustained from that hive Royal is still effecting me. I didn't think for one second i'd see anyone be able to harm me so easily, he was so fast and none of my ammo would get through his armor encusted skin. To think he would keep up with me and deal the first damaging blow, let alone (gulp) "kill Tim". "Did you say something Ekrem " no, i'm just thinking how to get a handle of the situation. "Ekrem your chest injury it looks like an infect..." Rorick i know what it is, and i know if we don't get back to Star Child(ship) then you're going to have one less friend on your hands.
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Name: John Forge Alias: Orion Race: Human Classification: Titan (brute!) Description: John, John, John... you are a strange one. I've kept my eyes on him since the moment we were aboard his ship. From what I've collected, he's quiet, strong, ect. yada-yada, big tough guy just like the rest of the brutes. But there are some things about him that are (shall I say?) different. He always seems to be so passive (strange for brutes) right up until he's taking orders. Then I get a little glimpse of what's really in him, and I'll admit it, even I'm scared of it. I don't believe he's rebellious... Maybe it's just part of being brute, or maybe something more(?). He also has a strange aversion to mars, and through my best attempts, I can't seem to piece that one together. And last of all, he's far more clever than Ide like him to be. It makes it so much more difficult to "persuade" him into gathering things for me. Surprisingly there's not much to gather about his past. All I can find on the subject is that he's been a guardian since the age of 18 (I had to take a little peek in Vanguard records for that) and that his only known relative is his sister, who is supposedly living on the outskirts of the city (this I gathered by vast amounts of time in tower A, and a couple of lowly bars I found nearby). Strange. The last thing I want to add is that in the two years that I've known this man, not once have I sensed the faintest hint of treachery in him. Perhaps he really is just a stupid brute. Or perhaps he's far more patient than I could have expected. Well, I'm going to have a hell of a time hiding this file. That bastard is always so nosy around my research notes! -Tempest
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I am Dragon-Fox Name: John Mercer Codename: Dragon-Fox Race: human Sex: male Birth: unknown Strengths: faithful , courageous , inner power Weakness: fears for people in need, moment of doubt in one self, loneliness Since I was a child I was on the street I steel to survive and kill in defiance all my life I wanted was a miracle. One small miracle to let me out of this hell. My mother got herself kill protecting me all I had left from her was her cross. My own father wanted me out of his life. I had now one left. I sleep on the old earth ruins were I starve and the only things to eat are worms. As Fallens invaded my only home and stole my stuff. One of them strangle me with too of there hands and punch my stomach with the others. They throw me to the ground and I was to weak to fight back. As they were ready to kill me. In explosion happened out of no were. From the smoke came big mettle people fighting and killing the fallen it felt like my nightmare was put to in end. One of the mettle man came up to me and toke of its helmet and it was woman she told me that "it's over." As I walk outside I see strange vehicles. I ask them who they are and they call them self The Guardians from that moment I swore to myself, my mothers soul and God that I will become a guardian and give hope and save lost souls who suffer the same fate as I did and help them rise up and struck fear to all those who stand against the last city. The same city that gave me the miracle I prayed for.
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Name: Ter'ant 'Te Algoin Nicknames: "Scourge of Space" Race: The Fallen Sex: Male Class: N/A (Profession: Professional pirate.) Bio: Ter'ant or Ter for short, was always obsessed with wealth from a young age. He started to steal anything he liked from a young age. He was even able to find someone to fence of valuable items when he was just 12 human years old. The Fallen are used to plundering but as all species they don't take to kindly to their items going missing. Ter soon learned that you can't get caught otherwise very bad things will happen. Over the years Ter has had some extremely close calls, one where he narrowly escaped being executed, but he always seems to squirm his way out of tight spots. As soon as Ter could he "borrowed" a ship. He then gathered other Fallen that felt like plundering other's spoils. However he was not picky about his crew; he would take any willing individual that would follow him. So every once in awhile he gets a non-Fallen crew member. He and his crew plundered systems for years, obtaining a large amount of wealth, weapons, technology, and even ships. Ter does not care what kind of ship he is plundering, only that if he can make money off of it. Ter over the years soon got bored. He got too good at taking convoys and learned to stay away from the "big" ships. However Ter will soon encounter something he did not expect. The rise of guardians that can make his life very hard. He would soon have to learn that humans had some pretty powerful resources. Although that makes them valuable, and of course Ter is always ready to take something of value. Psych Profile: He is very egotistical and quite full of himself. Should his ego be tarnished he may lash out very forcefully. He is still however and not stupid. Besides his ego problems he is relatively stable. Tactics: He fights dirty. VERY dirty. He is not above using any of his cheap tricks to gain the upper hand on any enemy. He is also very talented at hand to hand combat although he is still not a bad crack shot. He does tend to stay away from bigger guns but he does like to use bombs and other explosives. He will only fight if he knows he can win. So sometimes he will flat out run away and he has gotten very good at escaping. Don't expect him to stick around and fight a frigate though. Faults: Ego problems, cowardly, hesitant, greedy, stealing habit Strengths: Talented with weapons, good pilot, clever, agile, charismatic (Note: I am trying to make villain since this seems filled with heroes. Some of Ter's bio may change as we found out more about the Fallen. So I may fudge a bit with history and capabilities since I am not sure of them, but don't worry I will try to realistic to the information I am given, which I have done well so far. If you have any suggestions just feel free to tell me. I will also add to the character sheet later.)
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cpt. William Vintorez. Human,hunter. As the sniper in his squad William blames himself for the death of his best friend John and got promoted in 2 months of being in action he aspires as a leader. Hes a great shot and a great leader. His ship got shot down in Venus jungles where he survived 4 days of being hunted down by fallen then where his mission was to recon the area. His way of taking down enemy personnel is stealth,and not so subtle firefights. His currently in the last city awaiting orders. His attributes are talkative,well to trust and expert covert missions expert, great with people in his platoon and great pilot with almost all land-based vehicle. Father and mother were Puerto Rican father is a lawyer and mother a secretary at Guardian HQ. With two sisters.
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Edited by PR0per6RAMmar: 5/9/2013 2:54:02 AMThe following information has been declassified on order of the Guardian Council: 1st LT., William Ferris, Human, Male, Hunter Born in 2688, to Myriah and John Ferris (deceased) One known sibling: Kendra Ferris (Awoken, adopted, invalid) Guardian Affirmation Date (GAD): 5 Feb, 2700 Supervisor: Captain Victor Montgomery Avery Faction Memberships: The Black Garden, Storm Striders Active Service Length: 21 years, 4 months, 16 days Persona: Authoritative in mission, but not insubordinate. He is quick, efficient, and quiet. Off mission, he courteous and personable, but also quiet and often distant. He prefers the company of his invalid sister to that of other Hunters. He is known to be closely associated with Junior Warlock Quvera Kael and 2nd Class Titan David “Dingo” Mitchell. Both have been Guardians for at least as long as Ferris, both went with him through the academy, and both have records of uncooperative and insubordinate behaviors, respectively. Method: Utilize stealth until the last moment, then engage with surprise and ruthlessness. Weapons used are a suppressed shotgun and suppressed pistol. Verdict: Possibility Hello everyone! It's awesome to be part of a group devoted to stories in Destiny! Part one of my story 'Rain' is up already. Part two will be out soon! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iAqH3MIt2xSUW75XnJPVBhAeyMK_pnsvpCGNDBu2ysg/edit
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Murph Rogath A friendly, religious warlock from the Last City. He was banished to the badlands of Mars after a squabble with a citadel official's son and has been there for almost 3 years. While trying to survive the harsh terrain of Mars he meets a village of Cabal Centurions and their families, who also happened to be exiles. Murph soon became became friends with the villagers and resumed warlock training with the the local shaman. Murph became a hardened survivalist among the dunes of the Martian Badlands and is the main character in my short story The Wandering Guardian. *taking some sweet time off before i make part 3. Stay tuned :)
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Edited by Factornator: 5/16/2013 9:42:13 PMWilliam Aremos Human Titan Pheonix Clan Traits: -Old >Very sarcastic and humorous. >Natural leader. >On the DL. >Early 20's >Does not enjoy being put in front of large crowds. "Camera Shy" -Current >Battle Hardened >Serious >Late 30's, Early 40's >Lone Wolf >Dislikes large operation that require work with others >Refuses to become too close with others due to... certain events EDIT: The Current traits are what is taking place now. The old traits are currently in my story, because it is a prequel.
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_______________________________Guardian Profile Data_____________________________ Name: Ruseck “Rust” Proeliatoris Race: Exo Design Sex: Male S/N: 07113 Creation Date: 30th Aug. 2694 Specialization (Class): Titan Service: Army of the Last City <113th Exercitus Legio -EOD <3rd Praetorius Contubernium* -Operator Rank: Sergeant OR-5 (NATO Code) Diagnostics Profile: This Exo Unit>07113 has been fitted with the personality matrix and certain memory functions of a 21st Century Special Forces soldier for its combatant, psychological, and physical parameters. Its combative efficiency is remarkable and adaptability in environments soars beyond predicted capabilities. The Humanity Life Spark resembles almost the exact of an organic human minus the variations we designed the Exo units with; “he” has taken to calling himself “Rust”, I understand why this would be ironic with the Exo Units. Will keep further progress update on Exo Unit>07113, but overall status is Successful. -TERRA 245th Science Division “Project: Mortalis Defensor” 0815 By:RUSECK7113 ______________________________________________________________________________
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Edited by mavFIVE: 4/25/2013 3:06:02 AMRight now my approach is a little different. I'm planning on writing several short stories with unnamed characters. Namely one about a hunter, one about an titan, and one about a warlock. I'm going to use these to 'feel' out which one fits my writing style then maybe I'll start to develop some characters. Right now I really like writing these short stories but leaving out character names. It makes them like previews or glimpses into what is to come.
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Edited by GamerPete: 4/30/2013 7:32:04 PMSecond story, part one https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T57gyXc5Esyd25R8jvGw1q2t9yc5ur-UOsE0_ld8tzk/edit part two https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a1w0fu70UuoPkI8hVapuq0L-UQCnUMRb2Fph-OqZ23c/edit
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First Story! A bit dark https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xXQT1ax_9eRRKjniMBvdNMi73Qb3gslAEeR900tA1Vc/edit