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originally posted in:Art and Stuff
Edited by ant4given:
7/6/2013 11:27:37 PM
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Pike Wars (WIP)
So, This is my 3rd real attempt at digital drawing/painting. Please feel free to critque. I had fun so far, but wish to spend a little more time on it.
[b][u]Stats[/u][/b]
Time: 5-6 hours.
Program: PhotoshopCS6
Tool of Destruction: intuos5
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9 Replies[b]UPDATED[/b] - Took what you guys said and tried to apply it. - added detail to the front titan and pike - made explosion a little more defined - added horizon element + 2 hrs work. Detailing is hard work!!! Again, please feel free to comment and give suggestions.
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Looks cool, it seems like it's moving at a high speed
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[i]Intuos 5![/i] [i][b]NICE!!![/b][/i]
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2 RepliesI like the feel of the picture, you can really sense the movement. If I were to change anything in it I would say make the explosion more defined. Right now it seems just slightly too blurry, not as powerful as a defined explosion if you know what I mean. That and I agree with cal, having a slightly better defined horizon would be good too. The explosion, ground, and sky kind of blend together. That seems like a lot of criticism, but I really do like it I swear.
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1 ReplyReally interesting composition! Piggy backing on what Progo said, I think some ways to make it easier to understand what is going on is distinguishing the drivers face and defining the bottom of the vehicle that's in the foreground. Also having a clear horizon line or some reference in the background would be helpful. This is looking to be a really cool piece! I love the motion and dynamic movement!
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3 RepliesCool, though at first it took me a moment to distinguish what was going on, it's rather action packed haha! :)
