the hands need work. The Cabal's arms are far too small for his body. However, Hands are arguably the most difficult part of a person (or alien with hands) to draw. Also the swords are not good honestly. I like the action of the scene, but the swords are really poorly detailed and basically just big vague shapes. Plus, the whole "giant sword being blocked by small sword" thing is really over done in a lot of things. Also we dont really know if swords are in Destiny yet (cant imagine that they would be in) so the whole concept is shady. just some honest criticism. Not trying to hate or anything (but I gotta be honest, all this fan art makes me want to have a go at it.)