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Edited by twistedmetal:
5/27/2013 8:36:33 PM
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Feedback: "Spider Tank Battle" (Fan Art)
An engagement between Guardians and a battalion of Spider Tanks backed by Cabal forces. I would like to know if there is anything I could improve on or that might be added.
I went ahead and played around with the concept art image of the tank and re positioned various elements to make each tank different. I then added effects like sand plumes, smoke, and muzzle flashes to bring them to life. The rest comes from various other sources which all came together very well.
I would also be interested in spotlighting other people's work on our YouTube channel so I'll probably be browsing around the forums here a bit more
Video spotlighting the piece so far, accompanied by music:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fNNLF6rHiHI
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1 ReplyEdited by GrandmasterNinja: 5/27/2013 11:13:24 PMNot bad. I just think that you should blend it better with a hue change. For example make the people more yellowish to make it seem like the yellow sun and sand are reflecting off of them. Also try to soften up the edges of the characters so they don't look like they were "placed" into the pic.
