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originally posted in:Art and Stuff
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Edited by twistedmetal:
5/27/2013 8:36:33 PM
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Feedback: "Spider Tank Battle" (Fan Art)
An engagement between Guardians and a battalion of Spider Tanks backed by Cabal forces. I would like to know if there is anything I could improve on or that might be added.
I went ahead and played around with the concept art image of the tank and re positioned various elements to make each tank different. I then added effects like sand plumes, smoke, and muzzle flashes to bring them to life. The rest comes from various other sources which all came together very well.
I would also be interested in spotlighting other people's work on our YouTube channel so I'll probably be browsing around the forums here a bit more
Video spotlighting the piece so far, accompanied by music:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fNNLF6rHiHI
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Very rad! But I think there may be a bit too much negative space, and the flow and momentum feels.... lacking. Make no mistake; your work [b]is[/b] good. But I think you have it in you to make it [b]excellent[/b].
