I wrote a poem. Tell me the story you collected from it.
I'm not necessarily asking for criticism. I made this in about ten minutes, so I know it isn't going to be good. I just want to know if you think it makes the feelings presented very clear.
"Euthanasia"
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Sometimes when we’re alone
I just sit there and enjoy your sight
I look at every aspect of you,
Everything that nobody else would ever recognize
You cut your hair in some spots,
Maybe because it was out of line
You cake on too much make-up
To keep the imperfections out of sight
When I think of you do I imagine
Us making oaths we cannot abide?
Or maybe just a helpless victim
Waiting for your turn in line
I never meant to hurt anyone
If you want to know the truth
But sometimes I can’t help but think of all
The bad things I could do
I’ve been hurting all of my life
And I would never harm a fly
But I can say I -blam!-ing lied
When I said I’d be there ‘till I die
I know you’ll never forgive me
And maybe that I can take
But it seems that I can never sleep
In any bed I make
Now I’m here, we’ve traded place
And you’re crawling on the floor
Maybe we’re done and we’ve had our wrongs
Or maybe just getting bored
But one thing is always certain love
I could never pull the cord
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Also, if anyone wants to get something off your chest, I'm here to talk. On top of how I'm already feeling, fathers' day is coming up soon and my dad disowned me so I'm feeling pretty shitty.
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