I am going to make my character an Exo Guardian just because of this great story. It was so well written. I think the very first narrator was Kyjor talking to the same judge that sentenced Dartol. I feel like Kyjor will meet Dartol at the very beginning of his journey as a Guardian, and it will corrupt him. I also believe that Antom is actually like an evil master mind. Dartol is a badass, I will be playing as him in Destiny, just calling future dibs on that right now. Chenford reminds me lot of Commander Shepard. I like his character, but I hope he keeps running into trouble, because I think that kind of narrative is something I would like to read. The removement chamber was so cool, I want to learn about how the city has the ability to remove your powers. I feel like the fact that Datrol is MIA is cool because as soon as someone happens upon him, he could ruin the citys politics. I feel like Chenfords missioned tanked so fast because the hive had Datrol's papers that he gave to the enemy. Am I right on any of my answers?