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I got enough positive feedback from the preview that I decided to finish it. Here it is! The beginning of Prosper.
And I'm bringing back the audience questions! Yay!
[spoiler]Do you like the intro?
Who was talking during the intro?
Do you like Kyjor?
Do you like Antom?
What's your opinion of Dartol?
Or Chenford?
What the hell happened in the Removement Chamber?
So Dartol's MIA...huh?
Chenford's mission tanked fast. What did you think happened?[/spoiler]
"Hurry, daddy. I want to see the Gaurdians."
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Greatttt!!! I was so like ohhhh when the chamber energy flashed lol, and chenfords mission was well written I could feel the tension. Future Kyjor gotta be the narrator or maybe the traveler. My favorite part was when you were naming famous guardians in the parade I was like OMG I wish My team and I were walking with them in that parade. You just got me that more excited for destiny sir and I thank you